Reviews for When Heroes Fall
Guest chapter 20 . 12/11/2019
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OMG LINK FINALLY SAID IT HOLY MOTHER! DAMN IT, MIDNA WAS ABOUT TO RESPOND BUT REN HAS THE WORST TIMING! POOR BABE THOUGH IS SO SAD NOW OMG! HE’S GONNA GET HURT ISN’T HE OH PLEASE GOD NO! NO! NOOOOOOOO!

Btw I love you and you’re so damn appreciated, gonna give you a billion smooches over the internet, keep it up hun! Hope you feel better!
Guest chapter 19 . 12/11/2019
Is the next update coming this week? I know usually once you post a chapter on Patreon you post the chapter a week afterwards, I don’t know if something happened or you changed it to two weeks? Just wondering, I’ve been freaking out these past couple of days. I would absolutely love to support you on Patreon but sadly I’m not financially stable right now, so this I end up waiting. Which is perfectly fine, just wondering when you believe the update will come up on Fanfiction
Francisco chapter 13 . 12/6/2019
I've been rereading what makes a Hero and When Heroes Fall. How I wish you could publish them to print. They have been lifesavers. Thanks for the last 6 years of continuing writing. Please keep at it.

Kind Regards
RollingFire chapter 19 . 11/28/2019
If this chapter wasn't here after I finished your previous story... let's just say that I dont have the intense emotion to kill someone as much anymore. I'm not exaggerating either your previous story makes me want to kill someone to take out my anger.
unown1variable chapter 19 . 11/23/2019
Ey, great to see more as always. Gotta say, really looking forward to the reconnection and such, so keep doing your thing, and have a happy Thanksgiving!
Guest chapter 19 . 11/19/2019
I waited for this for so loooooon time! Finally it's happening and it was so beatiful. I have to say that Midna's emotions and confusion is so relatable, I really love her. And also hope that we can get more scenes of these two 3
InnerGlow chapter 19 . 11/5/2019
They finally had the talk! Granted, it had a bit more yelling than I’d been hoping for, but they still talked to each other about how stupid they’d been. They kinda needed to be told that. But now they’re making amends and getting to know each other again. Man, this was a good chapter. Thank you so much for this one Selphie. For a moment, we can just kinda forget about all the stuff with the king and enjoy them being together again. It’s still there, just more in the background to the reunion we’ve all been waiting forever for, them included.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/4/2019
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Wyrdeen chapter 19 . 11/3/2019
How nice to have Midna and Link bickering again ! I really liked this chapter, there were some pretty sweet moments, and I can only hope you will make Midna reconsider her first decision to leave Link !
Kenji Star chapter 19 . 11/2/2019
The more Midna is in this story the more I dislike her.

Her attitude changes almost moment to moment from lovestruck puppy to whiney baby to everyones punching bag.

I dunno. I was so excited for the actual reunion and the longer it goes on the more I greatly dislike it. Just not that long ago it was all "He's coming with me" and now its "Oh I'm ditching you bee-tee-dubs" and the whiplash was palpable.

Also I really dont get the reason they arent just offing the king guy. Yeah he's popular, but like, what are the people gonna actually do? I haven't gotten any idea of why Zeldas so afraid of it other than he's popular, but shes popular too and if the people are really so stupid that they'll believe "shes a doppleganger!" than theyre probably stupid enough to believe "he's possessed by a demon!" or some other such nonsense.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/1/2019
Awesome chapter I appreciate a lot you writing this many chapters so fast. Just what we needed. Thanks a lot
jjbro21 chapter 19 . 11/1/2019
This chapter was amazing! Hopefully next chapter will also focus more on midna and link getting reaquainted
TheChargingRhino chapter 19 . 11/1/2019
New chapter, yay!
nataliagaytan02 chapter 19 . 11/1/2019
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I don't have words. I just...love it
Guest chapter 19 . 11/1/2019
lol midna would never come back and link will settle down with ilia. like in oot he never gets the princess just the poor farmgirl.
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