Reviews for When Heroes Fall |
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![]() ![]() Well, there's also the whole "purest waters" and Zora's Domain isn't exactly "pure" anymore. Yikes. |
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![]() ![]() What a first meeting! I really liked it though - and I especially liked how you showed both sides (all three actually) of it by having Link show up and talk to Zelda about it. I just knew the curse shard would be what Link needs. He's probably feeling stupid for not grabbing it years ago. |
![]() ![]() *sigh* relief! Link isn't Viscen. But something is afoot. Has been afoot for years. What is Viscen's goal? I bet Zelda has been doing her best to keep Hyrule's secrets from him and I'm really sad for her. Arranged marriages, where one party isn't given much choice and there is an unequal distribution of power, are the worst. She holds the freaking Triforce of Wisdom! So the king is from Labrynna. Which land was Hyrule warring against when Beth's husband died? I really like the flashbacks to before/just after Ren was born by the way. Can you tell? Renado is awesome. This wise shaman. I liked Talo's family! And Kakariko's been repaired! I bet that goes a way towards assuring everyone that was trapped and harassed there by the bulblins that things are really peaceful. And actually traveling in Hyrule Field will help dispel feelings of anxiety over monster attacks. I bet Talo and Luda are thinking about planning a trip to Ordon. |
![]() ![]() Well this chapter was a rollercoaster! Ilia's gone and that's absolutely terrible. I wonder if any of the villagers, Rusl most likely or Uli, has gone back to Link's treehouse to find what they could salvage of if they just left everything there. Horses! Sometimes, what grief needs is a comfort animal. I'm glad Colin thought to get a horse for Ren. :) And now both are off to find Link! You know, I have my suspicions on Link (is he the stern king? did he find a way to the Twilight Realm? has he been bouncing around the kingdom? (if Rusl was still in contact with the Resistance he might have heard something tho) gone to a different kingdom?) It's time for the wide world! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woooohoooo! Finally some Midna action. I can’t wait to see what she’s been up to and how she reacts to meeting Ren, and the what she’ll do when she finds out what the king has done to her former hero. Also maybe a little bit of guilt for low key ruining Link’s adult life. So glad you updated, eagerly awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() sosososososossososososossososososossoosososososososoooooo goooood! |
![]() ![]() I love what you did here with the Hero of Time. Midna HYPE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. I love it. I need to know what will happen. I'm waiting the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YESSSSS WE GET TO SEE MIDNA IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i coulda sworn i reviewed a few chapters back,, agh did ff get rid of those? i dunno but i'll GLADLY add some feedback bc i just absolutely loved this chapter. made me feel all kinds of emotions lmao i love interactions between older heroes to new ones. i mean i know OoT Link was always the Hero's Shade in TP but he was just that. the Hero's Shade. not actually link himself so i just rlly rlly liked that u added him here. he was so wise yet.. a bit childish. adorable. i guess that makes up for the childhood he missed ;v; i'm guessing besides happiness after skyward sword after assisting so many heroes Fi gained more emotions? 'bossy' heheh i like the thought of her like that. its cute! but the mention of her here makes me miss her a lot too. also did u kill link? did u kill our boy?! we cant have that happen yet! (er um. or at all!) lolol aghhh everything abt this chapter was just sooo amazing i loved every bit of it n i cant wait to see what happens next..! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NEW CHAPTER YAY! Also this is getting very, very interesting. I bet you Link's gonna become Wolf Link at some point in this. Either that or Ren will. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm getting super excited! I can't wait to see how this all turns out! |
![]() ![]() just let him die. he needs to rest and reunite with his ilia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I must've been gone from this fic for too long. Viscen raided Ordon or something? And Link's probably still imprisoned by the guy. |