I finally caught up. Thanks again. I definitely need to know where this is going. I need to read the next chapter.

OMG

I'm catching up from last year, I don't know how you do it, but your writing always helps when life isn't going very well.

You are awesome. I still would love to get a printed and signed version of both books.

SELPHIE COMIN THRU W THE GOOD UPDATES AS ALWAYS
love it... especially the convo between rusl n link ... agh. i rlly am a sucker for father/son bonding stuff these days (i blame devil may cry despite the relationship not being actually good there LMAO)

anyways - thank u for the good food keep it up !

I'm glad Rusl and Link were able to find a moment of closure together (and that Link got some damned sleep, finally). We probably already established I *hate* Viscen, which means you've done it right

Oh this is getting so tense (in a good way)! I'm eagerly waiting every single chapter because I just can't for more. All these branching paths with the characters will come back together and I'm really excited (and worried) for how it'll turn out, especially with Viscen's intentions unknown. Despite the tension, this chapter has been the highlight of my day! c:

All my homies hate Viscen.

You’re a wordsmith, you know that?

dunno why I never noted this,but midna has huge mom energy.

thank u for the food selphie
my dude link is just. so. tired. ... i feel that lmao
i wanna give him a hug tbh

as always - amazing work! can't wait for another update!

I love this story so much I can't wait for the next chapter

This was so beautifully written! Between the darker moments came small bouts of dialogue that made me laugh and you struck a perfrct balancr of the two. I think this may be my favourite yet - the deep study of Link's psyche was so sad but so well done and, at times, so relatable too. I can't wait to see more! c:

Fi has a love hate relationship with Midna. I love it. Fight was unexpected, huge shadow beast was also unexpected. Keep it up as always, Selphie.

What a grear chapter! I hope you will update soon :)

I love this story so much! Please update as soon as you can!

Wow, great chapter. First Ilia and now Collin. The "Anyone Can Die" trope is in full effect here. Only thing I would have been interested in seeing possibly different was if Ren's slide into evil was more the result of his own free will rather than Viscen's trickery, in that Ren would actively want to kill Link like Link dreamed of him doing. Maybe something for an alternate scenario, but what's here is absolute Grade A material. Keep it coming, I look forward to Ren running through Viscen with a sword.

And Link's well deserved kicks to the balls continue. Ren summarized everything perfectly.