Reviews for When Heroes Fall
Singingtheblues chapter 27 . 2/5/2021
Everytime I read a new chapter, I'm reminded of why I began reading your stories. They're wonderfully written and can take me into the world of these characters better than most professional writers. Keep up the awesome work. Can't wait to see what happens next
legendofzeldafan1 chapter 26 . 1/21/2021
Wow. Just wow. That was a heart jerker of a chapter. I have come here from the prequel to this and I have read all of your book so far, suffering as your well written characters have suffered. Please continue writing this story. I have had so many fan fiction authors pull me into their story and then forget their creation. I genuinely love this tale that you are weaving and hope that you don't leave it at such a cliffhanger. This seventeen year old is counting on you to give more of a reason to get up in the morning. You are a great storyteller!
Sweesinz chapter 26 . 1/9/2021
This chapter broke my heart. Tears have been shed. I love it. Your words contain so much beauty and bring these moments to life. Thank you for everything you’ve done for this story and these characters!
mbvcxzlkjhgfdsapoiuytrewq chapter 26 . 1/5/2021
I was sobbing! This work is so beautiful, and this chapter didn't disappoint. I'm sad and certainly going to cry more, but I'm still so anxious to see where you go with this! Bless you and this work!
SpecialJewel chapter 26 . 12/12/2020
oh i'm so close to crying damn it don't look at me lmao can't even write a proper review rn jahshsnsjs

look what u did selphie. writing absolute good PAIN aagghhh
Morgan chapter 26 . 12/11/2020
I'm trying so hard not to cry, I didn't think Link's nightmare would be such immediate foreshadowing incredible as always
TheChargingRhino chapter 26 . 12/11/2020
Colin noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Also the Divine Beast returns after 15 years.

Stuff is happeninnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggg
jjbro21 chapter 26 . 12/11/2020
Beautiful simply beautiful! My vision is a bit blurry from the tears threatening to fall, but thank you. And welcome back!
Jane Keybored chapter 2 . 11/17/2020
(Ch 2) Holy Moly. Ilia.. just like that. I guess this story isn’t about her! No reconciliation for her.
Love This Book chapter 25 . 11/1/2020
Wow! This is awesome! I'm possibly more excited than you are! XD No, but I love this character development and where you are going with this. I really can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
kissyface900 chapter 25 . 10/30/2020
Excellent chapter once again! Poor Emeline hang in there girl be strong! Also just want to give kudos to you specifically in your writing of Viscen he is a truly scary and disturbing villain manipulating everyone like that. Love your writing and can’t wait til the next chapter!
TheChargingRhino chapter 25 . 10/30/2020
Stuff is happeninnggggggggggggggg
Sachgo03 chapter 24 . 10/8/2020
Ok so I’d just like to make it known that I was already in love with What Makes a Hero and now I have fallen equally as hard for this sequel! I honestly love Ren! Sure, he can be naive and childish at times, but he was a very sheltered kid with a slightly overprotective mother (from whom he also inherited a nasty temper!) so it’s understandable. I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t yelling at him not to side with Viscen, but it’s only because I love the poor boy and feel so sad for him.

This chapter and the one before are definitely my favorite so far, but this one... It made me feel all the things! Link feeling emotions againespecially for his sonis exactly what I wanted to see, I just didn’t expect it to be quite as heartbreaking! Poor, poor Ren! He just wanted to do the right thing, but emotions complicate everything!

I am so hyped for future chapters. This story is like my most favorite thing right now and, as far as I’m concerned, it’s totally canon. Thank you so much for writing this! Your storytelling abilities are legendary!
Revna chapter 24 . 9/18/2020
You ought to have Link drink from the wrong bottle and eat some bee larvae or something. I did that and his expression was hilarious! I swear it was an accident.
Joshua Donnelly chapter 24 . 9/13/2020
I've been following this series ever since I finished What Makes A Hero two years ago. From the beginning, I fell in love with your writing style and how you brought the world and people of Twilight Princess to life for us, in some ways even more vividly than the game! Here's to your continued writing and the adventures that are yet to come!
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