Reviews for When Heroes Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Everytime I read a new chapter, I'm reminded of why I began reading your stories. They're wonderfully written and can take me into the world of these characters better than most professional writers. Keep up the awesome work. Can't wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. That was a heart jerker of a chapter. I have come here from the prequel to this and I have read all of your book so far, suffering as your well written characters have suffered. Please continue writing this story. I have had so many fan fiction authors pull me into their story and then forget their creation. I genuinely love this tale that you are weaving and hope that you don't leave it at such a cliffhanger. This seventeen year old is counting on you to give more of a reason to get up in the morning. You are a great storyteller! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter broke my heart. Tears have been shed. I love it. Your words contain so much beauty and bring these moments to life. Thank you for everything you’ve done for this story and these characters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was sobbing! This work is so beautiful, and this chapter didn't disappoint. I'm sad and certainly going to cry more, but I'm still so anxious to see where you go with this! Bless you and this work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i'm so close to crying damn it don't look at me lmao can't even write a proper review rn jahshsnsjs look what u did selphie. writing absolute good PAIN aagghhh |
![]() ![]() I'm trying so hard not to cry, I didn't think Link's nightmare would be such immediate foreshadowing incredible as always |
![]() ![]() ![]() Colin noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Also the Divine Beast returns after 15 years. Stuff is happeninnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggg |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful simply beautiful! My vision is a bit blurry from the tears threatening to fall, but thank you. And welcome back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Ch 2) Holy Moly. Ilia.. just like that. I guess this story isn’t about her! No reconciliation for her. |
![]() ![]() Wow! This is awesome! I'm possibly more excited than you are! XD No, but I love this character development and where you are going with this. I really can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter once again! Poor Emeline hang in there girl be strong! Also just want to give kudos to you specifically in your writing of Viscen he is a truly scary and disturbing villain manipulating everyone like that. Love your writing and can’t wait til the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stuff is happeninnggggggggggggggg |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok so I’d just like to make it known that I was already in love with What Makes a Hero and now I have fallen equally as hard for this sequel! I honestly love Ren! Sure, he can be naive and childish at times, but he was a very sheltered kid with a slightly overprotective mother (from whom he also inherited a nasty temper!) so it’s understandable. I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t yelling at him not to side with Viscen, but it’s only because I love the poor boy and feel so sad for him. This chapter and the one before are definitely my favorite so far, but this one... It made me feel all the things! Link feeling emotions againespecially for his sonis exactly what I wanted to see, I just didn’t expect it to be quite as heartbreaking! Poor, poor Ren! He just wanted to do the right thing, but emotions complicate everything! I am so hyped for future chapters. This story is like my most favorite thing right now and, as far as I’m concerned, it’s totally canon. Thank you so much for writing this! Your storytelling abilities are legendary! |
![]() ![]() You ought to have Link drink from the wrong bottle and eat some bee larvae or something. I did that and his expression was hilarious! I swear it was an accident. |
![]() ![]() I've been following this series ever since I finished What Makes A Hero two years ago. From the beginning, I fell in love with your writing style and how you brought the world and people of Twilight Princess to life for us, in some ways even more vividly than the game! Here's to your continued writing and the adventures that are yet to come! |