Reviews for When Heroes Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() And now, for something completely obvious: the King is easily playing the Hero's son like a fiddle. I would ask how Ren could be so much of a chump as to fall for it, but then again when you're desperate to bring back the only person that loved you... |
![]() ![]() The Mirror of Twilight is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be... unnatural. Sorry, I couldn't help it after that last scene. But wow. The TP novelization was outstanding, but I have to say, this is better, if only because I have absolutely no idea what the heck is going to happen. Oh Ren, he's going to a dark place. I can't say I blame him too much though, the kid has had a messed-up life. I can't help but feel bad for Emmy though. Poor girl is basically carrying the kingdom on the back of her negotiating skills, and nobody her age should ever bear that kind of burden. The Hero of Twilight just keeps messing up, doesn't he? If he'd just apologized to Ren... In any event, I'm clearly incredibly invested in this story, and I have only ever been this interested.. I don't know, twice on this website? Absolutely outstanding story, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Link wasn’t good enough as a chew toy so you added Midna? Fair, fair. But Ren you poor bastard, to think a man who wheedled his way to that spot isn’t straight up lying to your face without popcorn. Ah the country bumpkin in his prime! Loving it |
![]() ![]() ![]() oml ren ... boy... if u DON'T- but hmm ... what if this does turn out differently? then again this is viscen we're talkin abt here so honestly this probably aint gonna go down well lmao. link, midna.. pls fix this shit IMMEDIATELY lolol can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaaaaaaaaaaaand ƒuk. Dammit, Ren... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like seeing this scary side of Viscen. And am very interested in this new alliance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No don't do it Ren! You're gonna ruin everything kid! Also the new Pokemon Mystery Dungeon released today so that's cool. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() I need more! Gotta know what happens next! Thanks for keeping at it after all these years :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() As a bit of a review of the story as a whole so far, your work is an absolute wonder to read. You understand the characters extremely well, and bring out the finer points of what makes them both unique and relatable to us as readers. Every time the King of Hyrule speaks I want nothing more than to bash his jaw, reading of Link's struggle at finding a point of reconnecting with his family and friends without letting his own feelings overwhelm him is heartbreaking to see unfold. The situations that they find themselves in seem fully believable within Twilight Princess's world, especially with how you've built and portrayed the story so far. Nothing seems too far fetched or out of the realm of possibility, and even when something outlandish or seeming out of character does occur, you manage to find a reasonable enough explanation for why it's happening enough for me as a reader to say, "Yeah, I can get behind that." It's clear the amount of time and dedication that has been carefully poured into this story and I truly cannot wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() Hi, I love story! I was wondering how often do you update the chapters so that I can have a better understanding as to when the next chapter might come. Thank you! :) |
![]() ![]() This has been such an enjoyable read, I can't remember the last time in the past decade that I've read so much and felt invested. I came across the prequel to this as the result of some art I saw, they had drawn some of what happened in the water temple from the last story and it instantly had me curious for more and more I sought. I found the page here and read through it all somewhat quickly, less than 5 days it took I'm pretty sure. Loved every minute. I was hesitant at first with this one though, I can't lie about that. The baby mama drama wasnt something that I enjoyed myself but by chapter 6 or 7 I was hooked all over again. I love the story and I just can't wait to see more, I was astonished to see this had already been in the works 5 years or so and had an update so recently. I've even picked up on a little expanded vocab from reading to use the few times here and there that I write something. Thank you for that as well. I kind of wish I had read more earlier on now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe that in all those 15 years of searching he never thought of the twillight crystal... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always good to see the story progress, this is one of the only reasons im still on this site its too good to leave behind! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NEW CHAPTER YAY When is the Curse Stone gonna be used? |