Hey hey hey! A new chapter right after I posted a review! I feel spoiled. Are you spoiling me?

Anyhoo, pretty good work right here, don't get hung up about anything. JoJo's going through things one notable day at a time.

Speaking of, I have to raise the issue - Exactly how many filler episodes are you going to have, and how much of the semester will you actually fill up with stuff? Also, with JoJo being actually present, how much will you change things?

JoJo's not a man to keep to the same tricks time after time, and he's probably going to strive to pick one or two things up - Aura, for one. Maybe combining his Aura with his Hamon to do something pretty damn devastating, knowing Joseph.

A whole semester is a hell of a long time to effectively sit around doing nothing. Volume 1 took up all of that. Aaaand hell, I have to wonder what kind of techniques and tricks Joseph will pull on us all. I'd say that he'd end up being the impromptu leader of sorts - the kind that you don't like, at all, but follow anyway because he's got the best idea of how to bring the enemy down, as quickly as possible.

I'm also looking forward to seeing Joseph tell everyone about the shit he's gone up against. It really shows what kind of world he grew up in - 18 year olds stormed the beaches of Normandy, and halfway around the world a 17 year old nazi sympathizer took on muscular Aztec men with his oiled balls, and defeated one of them by launching it into space.

Really, I have to wonder what kinds of things will phase JoJo, at all, and whether or not he'll become the rock which everyone relies on.

Anyhow, good show, great show! Keep rockin'.

Friday February 19, 2016.

Awesome chapter.

Well, honestly, I was thinking that with DIO being a thing here along with some counterparts to ther Jojo characters, why not go for a Stardust Crusaders or Eyes of Heaven story? Sure, that might mean more ground down the line, but anything beats Volume 3's finale at this point!

By the way, wow did that dream sequence end on a harsh note! Goes to show how easily some things can change!

A... cliffhanger! Oh no!

Dude, I know what you mean. As much as I love this and possibly quite a few RWBY fics, I have absolutely no idea how things are gonna go down. Cuz seriously, that moment affected me like everyone else, with surprise*.
However, I love how you use Light Dust vs Hamon, which is an interesting concept in a realm of Hunters. But with how this is going, is the events of Remnant's Phantom Blood timeline merely 50 or so years before the current RWBY timeline? And if so, are we going to be seeing a version of Ceasar Zepelli here as well, just more modernized?

P.S*
The phrase I wanted to use there will be in a PM so not to spoil anyone who hasn't seen the finale.

i actually liked it!

Absolutely love this story I really can't for you to make the next chapter.

I didn't mind the filler, since I don't watch RWBY! Though this story is kinda making me want to.

i love how your writing joseph its very acurate to the original

Good story as always, can't wait for the next chapter and I liked the fact that you at least gave Cardin a karma switch from asshole to guilty person who feels bad for what he has done, I read other crossovers and Cardin and his team is pretty much punching bags, probably because he hurt everyone's favorite bunny person even though she has so little screen time in the show. Hope you have a nice weekend!
(P.S. If you're gonna PM me about anything, my Account is Nemesis the Asshole.)

A pretty damn good work right here, and the latest chapter is a very decent length. I'd advise structuring it all better. Several points in the works were plain confusing to read. For the breaks between scenes, try adding details about the visible surroundings, and JoJo's thoughts of them. Not walls of text, but enough to clearly show that scenes have changed.

Exposition and further details on the world at hand are always appreciated - and it's the times where you begin to fill in the blanks which really make the fic your own.

Good work all in all. Followed and waiting for more.

This story is really good!

Heh, I'd hoped for something worse to happen to Rohan. Oh well. Also, Yang using Hamon? I kinda didn't expect that. Huh. Wonder how that's going to play out and who else can learn the Ripple.

Then again for all we know EVERYONE on Remnant can use the Hamon... which would sorta make sense in a way. Is the Zappelis and Joestars are one of the onlyones and they came from Remnant, then maybe only people with Remnant blood can use it.

Good stuff. Without Star Platinum I can't imagine how Johnathan is going to beat ZA WARUDO. keep writing :) nothing but support for you from me. good time

The fight between JoJo and Ruby was fun.. really enjoyed that. Felt very JoJo-ish and RWBY-ish simultaneously. Though I think someone would have noticed by now that Joseph doesn't have an Aura and would have mentioned it...

I found the conversation with Velvet really cute. If you're taking votes I like her better than Yang for a romantic match.. I love Yang, but Velvet in this case is just a personal preference. But either would work. SO GLAD you're not turning this into a harem comedy. Having a couple of people interested is fine and normal. Having EVERYONE is just annoying and ridiculous.

Good stuff overall.

Meh, I don't like the 5th member of the team thing. Reminds me too much of those endless terrible Naruto OC fics. Still it was nice to see Hermit Purple.