|Reviews for Goodbye|
| Daniella Wisdom chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Very good, if not a bit short.I dunno much 'bout Tenchi Muyo, 'cause I've never really watched more than three to five minutes of the beginning, anytime it was on cartoon Network. With that said, I think it was a good story.
| Red XIV chapter 1 . 12/28/2002
Er, how did Sasami die, when she & Tsunami are the same being?
| evilconcarne chapter 1 . 12/26/2002
Well, what do you know? A fic that's not half bad.
While I will continue to acknowledge you as 'overstated', I'll give you some kudos on this piece. Don't get used to it though.
| Ministry Agent chapter 1 . 12/24/2002
Sad to say, this isn't that bad. Still cringe-worthy, mind you, but the melodramatic angst seems to suit you however loosely. Probably the only fic I have found readable that has come from the pen of famed author extraordinaire, Clayton Overstreet.
Shame about the toe-curlingly bad 'my mind is a wonder, even to myself' coupled with the preachy line about Ryoko's immortality. More people have noticed it than you think... Diane Long, for instance. Who can actually write.
Think about it.
| Mangolia-kiss chapter 1 . 12/24/2002
that was so sad! what I think is that you shood do is write more to this story.