Reviews for To Go Forward
Juliasimon77 chapter 1 . 5/22
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Guest chapter 21 . 4/3
Fuck you and your bullshit
Guest chapter 24 . 3/5
Another dies
Mex chapter 24 . 8/31/2024
This story is my favorite GoT fanfiction. This is so good. I love it!
The plot divergence is so interesting (like Thoros swearing fealty). And I really like your characterizations. Most characters are realistic and not very likeable. You can't believe how much it frustrates me how Jon is only seen as the bastard everywhere he goes. Only reduced to a bastard all the time. Constantly reminded and resented for it. Holy, that is so frustrating. I am hoping he will find out soon that he in fact is not. Thanks for writing 3 hope you might continue sometime, maybe after rewatching GoT. I also only rewatched GoT after 5 years a few weeks ago which lead me here;)
EternalAnglo94 chapter 14 . 8/5/2024
Despite now having lived two lives and having learnt the truth he's decided he's going to be nothing more than one of Robbs men?

Jon could be the King and even if he doesn't want that he could still be more than what he is saying at the end of this chapter

I wish he had more ambition and self respect
EternalAnglo94 chapter 5 . 8/5/2024
If Eddard wrote that he took his Enemies seed into his home who else could it be but Jon?
It's not obvious but it's not that hard to see with all the evidence he has found in this alternate timeline
EternalAnglo94 chapter 1 . 8/4/2024
Why isn't Jon telling Eddard about what happened?
He knows the future and isn't a Self Insert so he has no reason to keep any of this secret he should be telling Ned about what happens both at the Wall and down South

Also the Reward Robert has given him is rather poor I mean just a Sword? Jon should of asked for the Nights Watch to be given something Robert could have given them a thousand swords and sent people from across the seven kingdoms to reinforce the Black Brothers of the Wall
sad chapter 5 . 5/27/2024
Your Jon is even stupider than the show. How sad.
Guest chapter 21 . 5/2/2024
sampqh
acetwolf94 chapter 24 . 3/9/2024
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
melikereading chapter 3 . 1/2/2024
Hello there!

So I’ve come the conclusion of why this story can be frustrating. The trials that are placed upon him don’t make sense with the time travel aspect. While agreed it would be disorienting, as someone who became Lord Commander, he should be more sure of himself and take action. A lot of the hesitation moments are not logical nor understandable for a more jaded Jon Snow, who is aware of future threats. Instead of coming up with new problems to solve for the change of character, it seems to be expected that the emotional burdens of the character would be sufficient to connect to canon plot.

But this is just my take on it,
Wish you well Author,
A Reader
Evans89 chapter 21 . 12/12/2023
Ghost was the best boy and did not deserve what you did to him. Being half Stark and half Targaryen is what made Jon Snow the song of ice and fire. Why cant he also have something that symbolize that he was one before he knew he was the other? Bring him back please if jon can resurrect why not ghost too?
14omega chapter 24 . 10/12/2023
One of the best stories I've ever read, it's a shame it was abandoned.
CritKhagan chapter 22 . 5/8/2023
Dany being a bitch, typical, always hated her
rideordieremember1997 chapter 24 . 4/6/2023
Where ? What is authors nick.
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