Dany being a bitch, typical, always hated her

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This is sh*t. One for he worst Jon Snows in all of fanfictjon. Holy sh*t what an awful story lol please never write again because you have zero f*cking talent

I am truly thankful that you didn't just lob dragon eggs in there as so many other fics are wont to do.

I agree that Jon is OOC but not egregiously so. The writing is overall solid and easy on the eyes.

All in all, a good job!

An... interesting start. Honestly, I cannot say whether I am keen on this fic or not. It's too soon. So, as I cannot fairly review it based off of this chapter alone... on to the next chapter!

I honestly when writers write stories like this where Catelyn and by extension Sansa are forgiven so easily. Like it’s the stupidest, most unrealistic thing. It’s like honestly trying to make the protagonist look better, it doesn’t, it just makes for a like complex character with flaws and grievances that they have to figure out.

Bro why the hell does EVERY time travel fic have jon being a weak pussy?! I mean he fought against wights and the Others, he shouldn't even come close to being beat by some fucking no name just because he's stronger. And the excuse of jon succeeding in his future battles because of arrow fire may be true, but the doesn't fucking matter, he has the experience and the 'skill'.

Damn Ned! You fucking hobbled your way all the way from Kings landing!
Fucking legend

on's attitude towards Rhaegar. I mean sure, he grew up hearing all Targaryens are monster and Rhaegar in particular was a kidnapper and rapist, and he hasn't exactly had time to process yet, but by the letters he has it becomes obvious that she loved Rhaegar and he is not a bastard. as his mother wrote they were married before a Heart Tree,and there is record in the citedel of a afishal mareg this makes Jon legitimate, and Rhaegar is neither a kidnapper (they eloped), nor a rapist (they were in love it is overs in the letters). Also, he has to consider that before that whole mess (and even after it), Rhaegar was one of the most beloved princes ever, both by the smallfolk and by the nobles, and that he was, by all acounts, "a good man". Rhaegar can, at worst, be considered a lovestruck fool who shirked his duty to the Realm but one letter whas calling for pease with the starks so i whoud have seras qwestons why he did not lessin or reply to Rhaegar this aso shows he is not a monster. I hope Jon rereads the letters and comes to at least some of these realizations soon,as it is so bluntly overs to see he would be a inbsile to not see this because the way everyone, including Jon himself, is looking at the sitauation is that Jon is somehow "tainted" either by the conditions of his birth or the identity of his father, and that couldn't be farther from the truth. this is so stupid i wish you the best with the story tho but i dropping it hear

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You know nothing jon snow, it is certainly the truth, he does not have any kind of education for the task that has been assigned to him

Honestly I’ve always wondered if Ned didn’t have some sort of contempt against Jon for what his mother did. I’m not saying that Ned didn’t love him but I’ve always thought that’s he’s technically always chose Robert over his siblings. I’m not saying that Ned didn’t choose his sister when he hid Jon’s parentage but the way he tried to push Jon into the night watch or at least made it the only real option for Jon really made me dislike him.

Great story!

Waaaaay too many dreams, visions, internal monologues, and flashbacks.