|Reviews for To Go Forward|
| ChildofDragons chapter 6 . 7h
"He died... that's why I was thankful that he didn't have his father's coloring and took him into my house."
"Oh dur, okay that's believable!..." "I must keep knowledge that can save my family and prevent a war to myself... wait, i'll tell my fat stranger possible friend the truth instead of my 'father'!"
| Mr.Heller chapter 8 . 6/14
So much drama could've been avoided if only Jons brain was bigger than a peanut.
| pattywack chapter 24 . 5/24
I really enjoy this so far. I like the idea and it's progression so far. I'm looking forward to more when you release the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/1
I’m actually annoyed with how petulant you’ve made Jon. He acts like a boy when he is a man, seriously the guy fucking died and now he’s prone to emotional outbursts just cause he has to talk about his parents. Also god forbid you give him the ability to understand what he reads it’s obvious from what we read that rheagar and lyanna were in love but Jon simply refused to believe that.
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/1
You know I love how people use the most surface level of the prophecy. Rheagar is obviously Azor Ahai, but Azor Ahai isn’t the hero he is merely the creator of light bringer.
| PinkSlytherin chapter 24 . 12/30/2020
Love the story! Thank you!
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/8/2020
Your jon is such a depressed idiot he cant even get angry
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/8/2020
Jons being a bitch and jusy eating all of these insults without talking back
| vega0987 chapter 24 . 12/3/2020
Great story, I hope that one day the author continues writing.
| Guest chapter 24 . 11/6/2020
Hi, hopefully an update?
| stevem1 chapter 24 . 11/4/2020
This is an excellent story. I do have critiques, mostly that the characters are drama queens, but it is an entertaining read. Well done author.
| stevem1 chapter 15 . 11/4/2020
Now Robb’s IQ drops. Jon makes good points about Theo and Robb loses his temper with someone he thoughts was his brother who’s being sent away.
| stevem1 chapter 14 . 11/4/2020
I despise the easy forgiveness of Catelyn and Sansa in these stories when they beg it from Jon when they realize he’s not Ned’s. It’s a common refrain in a lot of FanFiction. So far as I’m concerned, they showed their colors when they verbally and emotionally abused a bastard. Now that they think he’s a prince, he should scrap the mud of his shoes.
| stevem1 chapter 13 . 11/4/2020
I really like the substance of this story but Eddard is a putz and Jon a drama queen.
| stevem1 chapter 8 . 11/4/2020
I really dislike Eddard Stark and Jon Snow in this story. Jon knows what is coming and he’s acting blasé about getting the girls out of King’s Landing. Eddard is being given the clues he lacked in canon and he’s ignoring them.