Reviews for To Go Forward
Jerome Dopheide chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
Will Jon's new sword be a valyrian steel, and if so where will Robert get it from. Sorry, I'm not trying to criticized but I do like time restart.
Machoking chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
Very very good writing. I look forward to more.
Cancer-Chris chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
I like this plot and your writing is particularly good, great grammar.
My fave part is that you included Jon's stab wounds; this is the first time travel asoiaf fic I've seen to have some remnant of the past apart from memory. I can't wait to see where this goes next.
One thing though, when Jon woke up I wouldn't have expected him to think of the Seven hells seeing as he doesn't worship them or even know much about that faith. At least I wouldn't expect it from my reading of his chapters.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
Such a well written first chapter! Keep it going :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
more soon please
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
Ooooo! A time travel fic! My favorite kind and yours has such a great beginning. Jon being suspicious of Ned is getting me all excited. Lord Commander Jon is going to create an interesting dynamic with the rest of the family. Will Bran know or dream of it? And Jojen later on?

Can't wait for more!
joe63129 chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
Very interesting. i will follow this story. I can see this story becoming great if done right.
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