Well nuts.
Please finish this its too good to leave unfinished and you’re so close!

Uh oh.

I know I’m behind so this is just me musing I guess… But I do hope she trusts and confides in Severus. He is worth saving and I think she would be good for him. If he’s busy helping her hide where she’s from and taking down Voldemort he can be a good guy from the start.

I’m going to end up not getting any sleep before work but I can’t bring myself to care. There are too many chapters to get through.

Honestly I almost didn’t read this because of some of the reviews, but I’m glad I did. Now I just hope its not a dead story.

COMPLETLY UNECESSARY PREGNANCY! if you want to read this but pregnancy is a turnoff for you, AVOID THIS FIC AT ALL COSTS. It gets weirdly pro life and her romantic interest suddently becomes unsupportive (hes 17! Ughh), and it has NOTHING to do with changing the past, just some cheap angst and teenage drama

Congratulations on graduating, and thanks fire wilting such a great story! I can't wait to see where you take it.

This really is pure wank fantasy isn't it.

Fooling Voldemort with fake memories... There's been absolutely no build up on why Hermione would be so amazing at it other then because.

The fact she's just accepted as a black with literally no evidence at all is already ridiculous.

Just can't continue this.

Sectumsempra can't be healed normally only Snape himself could heal the injury because it's dark magic and only he knew the country curse - so did Avery continue for months with no fingers on one hand? It's not mentioned?

Also the whole premise is flawed of this story. If Hermione got out and memory charmed people and inserted fake records of herself etc maybe you could pull this off - I say maybe because you still have the magical family tree...

But her just showing up and saying I'm a Black no biggie. The biggest baddest magical family of that time.

That would be like one of us running into whatever president or prime minister's home and just saying casually it's alright I'm the son/daughter they never knew they had.

It's ridiculous.

Especially Slytherins as they are at this time - almost already death eaters. They would not just accept Hermione saying it. The BLACKS would not just accept it.

I hope you graduated alright? This is some intense cliffhanger and now I'm pretty depressed. This is like the 4th story in a row where they all stop at this kind of point. Maybe you'll have the time to update... idk. Hopefully you're well post-pandemic. Fingers crossed. And if it wasn't obvious, I love this. Some parts confused me but I know they had a point.

This was going so well until the anti-choice bullshit… such a pity.

Honestly have no patience for Severus right now

Aaah I didn't realize this wasn't complete - please don't let this be a cliffhanger forever! Such a fantastic story!

i love this so much, i hope you are okay, and i will wait forever for an update.

OH WOW I LOVED THIS! HOPE FOR AN UPDATE SOONISH