Reviews for Onnafied
SSGSS Aym chapter 4 . 12/17/2016
Hahahaha! What are we having for dinner? Roasted vegetables butt?
BookBunnies chapter 30 . 10/15/2016
Love this. It's funny as hell. Please do continue.
Vangran chapter 17 . 9/19/2016
Wow, he screwed over his own son! Granted the kid is from an alternate future but still!
Guest chapter 30 . 7/25/2016
This is too good please continue the story we all want to see more!
Joshua Mirror Plotkin chapter 30 . 3/9/2016
you BASTARD! You wrote the best DBZ fanfic I have ever read, that I staid up late to finish chapters ONLY TO END IT WITH YOU BEING KILLED AND NOTHING RESOLVED! DAMN YOU!
DatCrazyAnon chapter 30 . 11/28/2015
Nice job, m8

You made me finish a complete fanfic of a STRAIGHT COUPLE

nickkenagy chapter 30 . 11/23/2015
goldennarmyman chapter 30 . 11/18/2015
Finish this please
princesskanji13 chapter 30 . 7/9/2015
CocoTheHedgehog chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
Randomer77 chapter 2 . 3/29/2015
Ya know this is interesting so far however i noticed one thing: Goku used the word anatomy.
slightly altered personality or not (presumably because of a shift in hormone's or just plain: beets didnt want vegita to get together with an idiot) how whould goku know that word?
Lover Of DBZ chapter 30 . 2/16/2015
Please write more...I wanna know if Veggie and Kayak get together
Guest chapter 30 . 12/16/2014
What the heck! How can u not possibly update!? It's been 6 years! Omg. I mean talk about a cliff hanger. You completely left that ending up in the air! Ugh! I hate when authors get bored and don't end their stories! I thought this time it would be different considering you have 30 chapters. But nooo I still have yet to find a fanfiction with an ENDING! I REALLY HOPE U POST SOON! At leasthave something up by 2015! *throws phone and storms off..
Sabere Commander chapter 30 . 10/5/2014
Since you abandoned this can I make a rewrite of it?

Was hoping for a little more Vegeta/Goku resentment though... And an actual fight to begin... Man Goku is not only stupid but an arrogant bich too!

He's being a dick so she doesn't see how much she ruined his life and what an effect a 3rd class warrior had on THE prince.

She hurt him, a lot, and then she pulls that crap on him expecting him not to be an emotional wreck/ enraged or heart broken?

Seriously I can't believe her...
Sabere Commander chapter 29 . 10/5/2014
Vegeta should die during the invasion...

Think about it... He's miserable with out Kakarotto, she's nervous and confused with him around, and he should find out it's all his parents fault and then he gets killed...

When you due in heaven/hell you go to oblivion remember?
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