you finally rewritten the story, good.
even if the eevee fight is good idea, i think the original prologue (with ash mother killed at home on purpose, and ash fully raised by shadow pokemon with scene of meeting, etc) was more interesting and touching.

An interesting beginning, I am eager to see what if any changes will come. For the eggs I am going to say a Growlithe. Good Luck

this is brilliant and could ash get a charmander? Also will you be including mega evolution in this?

great chapter and i LOVE the story already. could you give ash a female SGardevoir?