Reviews for What Goes Around Comes Around |
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![]() ![]() I love this story so much! And I just realized-John is upset that he left Dean and Sam and Dean tells John that "It's okay". I remember John saying that Dean would always tell him that things would be "okay" whenever John was upset about something. Idk if this reference was purposeful or not but it was really sweet either way. Love it! |
![]() ![]() I loved this story very much Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My. Heart. Argh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a nurse ave my heart ached fur these sweet, sick kiddos... really nice job there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the ending :) I'm glad John got there in time, Poor Dean, never knows how to take care of himself-and still doesn't. I thought it was sweet that Sammy ran to find him and stayed with him so he wouldn't be scared when he woke up. I felt bad for John though, he does try. Another lovely story, I always love how you write WeeChesters :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love how protective, cute and blunt Sammy was in this chapter, :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What? It's the end? *pouty face* But I was really enjoying it! The story could've gone on until they brought Dean home, but it felt complete in the way you left it anyway so I'm not really complaining. While the concept was fairly common, the way you wrote it was the clincher for me and I particularly enjoy it when authors put in little metaphors or similes such as the one you did: “in a tongue as dry as cotton”—I just think it enhances the story so much because it's not as verbose as it could be and that's the mark of a good writer. I think it might have been Albert Einstein who said: “If you can't explain something simply, you don't understand it well enough.” Anyway, thank you for the excellent read! Much Love, Soulhearts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww, poor Dean... I hope he is alright |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no, I hope it's John! Poor Dean :( I loved how Sammy wouldn't leave him though, he's such a sweetie. At least they weren't throwing up at the same time. I hope my boys feel better soon ;) Thanks for updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great one thank you for a great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw nooooo~ don't leave it there! Ugh, that was so enjoyable and cute. I really like sick Dean, you get a lot of sick Sam stories but hardly any where Dean gets sick/also gets sick. It's kind of adorable that Sam is so worried about his brother but I guess this kind of thing would have only fed his later complex about how Dean was always the strong one and gave up everything for him. Nice work! Please update as soon as you can because you left it on such a cliffhanger (though I have suspicions about who it could be and also who I hope it'll be.) Much Love, Soulhearts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe to cute. Update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww, poor boys, :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, very cute! You've definitely got some good brotherly feels going on—I like it. I hope you update it soon, I think I'm really going to enjoy this fic. Much Love, Soulhearts |