Reviews for The Masters Quest
Xerzo LotCN chapter 21 . 1/18/2017
no dont cut girls from the harem wait what was the harem ... was this story that had male pokes x female harem memeber as minor side to bide time till they got there turn if so that wasnt pleasant not at all i didnt like it please dont do that ash x female poke ok ash x female harem member ok female harem member x female harem member ok other male or male poke x female harem member no its to close to nasty ntr the worst scum in the world hate it ... if this wasnt the fic ok doesnt include you but don't remove the girls
Guest chapter 15 . 7/23/2016
*buneary *sec

Also, I'm pretty sure it's not Princess Saliva. That's spit.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/23/2016
Why is there a part where Sabrina and Boundary start raping Ash and Pikachu? I don't care if they enjoyed it in the end, they certainly hadn't given consent when the sec started.
Martial Arts Student chapter 7 . 2/10/2016
A champion sandwich, nice.
Martial Arts Student chapter 6 . 2/10/2016
I don't like that Sabrina's outfit is just a colour change from Misty's first outfit.
StallionWolf chapter 9 . 2/5/2016
So we know Snivy likes Pikachu...but what if Misty's Marril, May's Glaceon, Dawn's Buneary, and Iris's Emolga did too?
Martial Arts Student chapter 4 . 9/27/2015
Well this is becoming a weird and fucked up fanfic.
Joda-Eragonsson chapter 3 . 9/11/2015
No many spelling and grammar mistakes, which are making this a pain to read. You really need to proof read your writing, I counted several times where you named Ash as a she, which I feel is really lazy in your part to not at least re read after you've completed to chapter. However I do like the concept so far
Martial Arts Student chapter 3 . 9/5/2015
I don't like the concept of pokemorphs. Ok chapter but you referred to Ash as she a few times.
Poke'boy24 chapter 3 . 9/4/2015
Wow, epic plot twist. Can't wait to see what happens next.
UltimateCCC chapter 2 . 9/4/2015
The girls are watching.
UltimateCCC chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
Salvia.
PyroSolracIII chapter 3 . 9/4/2015
A few mistakes, but still a good chapter.
By the way, maybe it was because it was a short explanation, but your anthros sound closer to humanized. Is that the case, or is that because you haven't gone into detail?
Clones501 chapter 3 . 9/4/2015
On the pokemorphs topic are some of them going into the group of women?
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 2 . 9/3/2015
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I can't wait until the Rocket Trio shows up
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