Sometimes a nice sweet Harmony story is what I'm looking for. They are so powerful & really are in love. It just makes me smile.

Brilliant

A typo that needs correcting, it's Amos Diggory, not Amos Diggery.

A typo that needs correcting, "she said und explained", should be "she said and explained".

A couple of typo's that need correcting, "ended up braking my wrist", should be "ended up breaking my wrist" and "she had to led him in", should be "she had to let him in".

A typo that needs correcting, "but I can proof", should be "but I can prove". Interesting chapter.

Hi,

I loved your story. I admit I got a little lost over time, at some point we are at the tri-wizard tournament they want to defeat Voldemort before the tournament starts. we finally understand that it's not possible and that he succeeds in defeating him the following school year, that's what I understood. so they're in 4th grade, except what you're talking about buzzards. I said to myself good I wish a year they are in 5th year finally. they manage to defeat Voldemort, and during the summer they age 2 years but as a reminder they are in 5th so they are 15 years old. 2 is 17 years. the minister of magic has validated the asps why notthe minister of magic has validated the asps why not the buzzards. I know I quibble a lot. Sorry, but I really enjoyed the whole story from start to finish.

Thank you very much and good luck.

Adel.

I really enjoyed reading this

"No. I'm going to vanquish Voldermort in a proper fight, not with unfair means like invisibility."

So he'd rather risk his life to have a "fair fight", whatever that means, than just kill a terrorist in a surprise attack.
That's one of the stupidest thing I've heard in my life. I'm glad there's only one chapter left, I'd have dropped this fic mostly because of this one line.

Time portkeys aren't a thing anymore unless it's to take a vacation?

... They didn't ward St. Mungo's, Hogsmeade, or the train areas.

If they weren't told that animal was killed, just that a place was being attacked, why couldn't they use the time Portkeys to show up and ambush the people attacking places? Especially Voldemort? They keep saying that they can't catch him, yet have time travel on their side.

It doesn't make sense (both that they would go to the past and return a month into their vacation AND that Sirius couldn't go with them). They can make time Portkeys, so why don't they return just after they left? Yes they will age in the past, but it's only for a month... Unless they're planning on being there a lot longer and only returning after a month? It's been a long time since I've read this story, I think.

I thought they (at least Hermione and Harry) already had been swimming since Rowena showed them the room with the pool?

Good story so far. But, no language barrier? It may still be English, but over a thousand years English can change a lot.

It is a cute must read. I think it is a PG-13, but easily could be younger, except for the way deaths were done. Intentionally sending to veil of some, without stating empathically that you had to rape/murder to get the death marks, is not very good for kids.