Reviews for Nessie's Story
TravelSick chapter 48 . 9/9/2018
Hope you look at writing more...
talyak chapter 48 . 3/24/2016
hehehe these two are cute! :) update soon
fallunder chapter 44 . 2/3/2016
:)
maxe03 chapter 36 . 12/20/2015
Wow Nessie seems a lot more mature than Jake. Which is a little surprising considering his age and some of his experience as an alpha
maxe03 chapter 27 . 12/20/2015
I wonder how that works with younger members of the pack looking like adults
maxe03 chapter 23 . 12/20/2015
I thought Jakes pack was bigger than that
maxe03 chapter 37 . 12/20/2015
Why is Seth scared of mike he's fought vampires and should be in his adult forms prime like all the wolves
maxe03 chapter 22 . 12/20/2015
Jake is bad alpha in this he has basically been ignoring his pack the whole story. There is also no way they don't know what he's been doing since he has phased
maxe03 chapter 21 . 12/20/2015
That nightmare she had is seeming a lot more ominous and hopefully won't turn out to be a premonition
maxe03 chapter 19 . 12/19/2015
Wow ness perspt is a nice take on the story a d surprising
maxe03 chapter 16 . 12/19/2015
I wonder how long its goi g to tak them to buy a kamw sutura or use the internet. Surprised they weren't at it all night and didn't try doggie
maxe03 chapter 8 . 12/19/2015
Okay I thought Jake already knew how go control his thought well at least he did enough in the movie to bother Edward and really is Edward the one to be saying someone should know better cause of age
maxe03 chapter 7 . 12/19/2015
They're still going to hurt him when they knew this was coming so CE she was a baby
maxe03 chapter 4 . 12/19/2015
I wonder if he noticed he jealous and if he's collage educated, also surprised she thinks he's a were wolf
maxe03 chapter 3 . 12/19/2015
I wonder if Jake has learned more about his powers now that he knows he isn't a were a d knowing the origin
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