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hehehe these two are cute! :) update soon

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Wow Nessie seems a lot more mature than Jake. Which is a little surprising considering his age and some of his experience as an alpha

I wonder how that works with younger members of the pack looking like adults

I thought Jakes pack was bigger than that

Why is Seth scared of mike he's fought vampires and should be in his adult forms prime like all the wolves

Jake is bad alpha in this he has basically been ignoring his pack the whole story. There is also no way they don't know what he's been doing since he has phased

That nightmare she had is seeming a lot more ominous and hopefully won't turn out to be a premonition

Wow ness perspt is a nice take on the story a d surprising

I wonder how long its goi g to tak them to buy a kamw sutura or use the internet. Surprised they weren't at it all night and didn't try doggie

Okay I thought Jake already knew how go control his thought well at least he did enough in the movie to bother Edward and really is Edward the one to be saying someone should know better cause of age

They're still going to hurt him when they knew this was coming so CE she was a baby

I wonder if he noticed he jealous and if he's collage educated, also surprised she thinks he's a were wolf

I wonder if Jake has learned more about his powers now that he knows he isn't a were a d knowing the origin