|Reviews for Arachnid Online|
| ptl chapter 3 . 6/24
Maybe Peter was at the start of his superhero career when he moved in to Japan, so no one recognized him.
I think the reason the spider-sense activates near Shino isn’t because she’s dangerous but she’s attracting danger, like Kyouji, or maybe it’s instinctually being wary of because of her skills in the virtual world, despite not being physically stronger than a normal teenager. I think there was a term in Accel World and its crossover with SAO where you can guess how dangerous a foe is, especially players or AIs, though some kind of ‘aura’ or information pressure that filters through the virtual senses of the avatars, with only perceptive players being able to sense it. That could also extend to every skilled player if they decide to train and apply realistic game skills in the real world.
Apart from flinging theories, I would like to the reaction of the rest of the SAO cast to Spider-Man, especially those affiliated with the government.
| ptl chapter 2 . 6/17
Maybe Peter was sensing some member of Laughing Coffin or Kyouji stalking Shino.
And knowing this is the Marvel universe, Laughing Coffin could be even more dangerous if they take hold of any super technology or someone with superpowers to do the killing.
If Peter decides to play VRMMOs, he could be one of the strongest players do to his superhuman reflexes and his crimefighting experience, besides the more powerful physical capabilities and skills of virtual avatars that could allow him to partially replicate Spider-Man’s acrobatic fighting style. Would his spider-sense activate while in cyberspace, because he usually wouldn’t be in danger in those games (unless they’re Death Games) and his senses would be redirected by the Amusphere.
Apparently in Japan, they’re more tolerant of bullying compared to most other developed countries as well as more aversion to psychological therapy. That... would have some response from Peter, who had tons of versions of himself being bullied.
| CaptainBeckett chapter 2 . 9/29/2017
"I cant wait for the next chapter" *sees last update "oh" *slowly backs up from laptop gets down into a fetal position
| Darkus and Z chapter 2 . 5/12/2016
Building up plot I like your style. Sign Z.
| Slick chapter 2 . 5/8/2016
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/4/2016
When's the next one?
If I may be so bold as to ask?
A possible time-stamp would be nice.
| Daverocks5941 chapter 2 . 5/3/2016
I like it so far, I can see a big plot coming from this. Just one question, is this before SAO or ALO, or are you going directly to GGO?
Good story! Keep the good work!
| Purplepanther7 chapter 1 . 4/14/2016
Amazing! I really want to read the next chapter! I love Sinon I think she is an awesome character and I think making her meet Peter is an amazing idea that I could never come up with! Why is Peter in Japan? Will Sinon and Peter become friends? Is DeathGun going to be in this story? I guess I'll just have to keep reading and find out! I can't wait!
| Darkus and Z chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
Amazing plot when is the next chapter? Sign Z