Reviews for The Pines Family of Glass Shard Beach, NJ
KendrixTermina chapter 3 . 9/25/2015
Very good work.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/18/2015
Why? WHY?!
the indecisive bird chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
Done already? Huh. I didn't notice that..
This was real good. Keep up the good work!
RockSunner chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
Great work. I'm glad Stanley told her the truth.
XXPay4XtraShippingsXX chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
That's all I can say—that epilogue really hurt. Good hurt—it was so beautifully tragic.
Wonderful story. I'm sad to see it end.
Keep writing and God bless,
Squideepoo chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
This was so sad and perfect! What a great ending! What a great idea, to follow her around. So often such background characters get ignored.
Candymouse22 chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
Great ending!
XXPay4XtraShippingsXX chapter 2 . 8/9/2015
Breathtaking chapter, which I suspect will be a regular thing with you. :)
I say that not for any one big thing, but just the way you really get us invested in these guys. It's amazing.

Keep writing and God bless!
XXPay4XtraShippingsXX chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
This is so good already—and tragic as well. I like the way you write these guys. :)
Keep writing and God bless,
RockSunner chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
Powerful, great story. Kudos on making the child a grandson rather than Shermy himself. It's the only way the ages work. Sad that her last letter to her son was mostly lies.
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
I love the inclusion of the edited letter and the idea about 'Shermy' (the ages just don't work out if the baby is the grandfather). Maud's a fitting name.
the indecisive bird chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
Y'know, Sherman being the twin's older brother actually makes sense-WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE JUST WHY
Well. You did good. This was great.
I'll be waiting to see more!