Reviews for Ascension of a Demon
Capricorn the mediocre chapter 6 . 1/28/2016
Interesting I will make sure to keep reading
ShyheartTheWarriorCat chapter 6 . 1/28/2016
I don't even-... What...
Why was Pony-Arkraith on fire!?
ShyheartTheWarriorCat chapter 5 . 1/26/2016
I forgot I wasn't logged in XD
Awesome nonetheless!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/26/2016
Me chapter 1 . 1/25/2016
ur a sexy beast
ShyheartTheWarriorCat chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Arkraith Arkraith Arkraith Arkraith Arkraith Arkraith! Make ch 2 please?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
This story is shit... that one guy that you reviewed called psychich i think or something like that? Idk but man your shit at this story
ParradoxUniverse chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Sorry this review was a little late... no data and I'm in the Netherlands atm!

First thoughts?

Hmm... good story idea, interesting character interactions.

Don't take offence but you need a beta for your grammar and spelling which are just not acceptable. I would be happy to help if you need one, this fic has such great potential but bad spelling and incorrect puncuation just killed it for me.

Pacing was good, felt like I was in a World of Warcraft expansion with all the names and a demon universe? Really?

Alrighty then... let's see you make it work!

All in all, 5.5/10.

Pretty good for a starting chapter, but get yourself a beta reader and fix that grammar and spelling!


P.s I'll be watching...
TheThreeCreepypastaOCs chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
Like the story Arkraith. It could be a bit longer, but I know your trying your best!