Reviews for Moments in Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit... I just realized that the Marvelous Land of Oz, which I read unquestioningly as a child, is basically a book about a trans kid, published in 1904 and beloved by generations since |
![]() ![]() Many thanks for writing this story. Kept me entertained ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is sweet to have Ron seem to have a clue, but not very realistic. Also, since when does Ron apologize for anything, or even accept blame for what he does or doesn't do? |
![]() ![]() "Yeah! That's what I was thinking too," Harry said, his heart starting to beat faster, and he smiled. He knew Hermione would understand. ️ Well, at least you got a reason for these adults hiding while the kids are forced to fight. Besides, I also like Fudge seeing the chamber and the basilisk. I love the changes you made. |
![]() ![]() Hey, that's a lovely story I love the changes you're making and they're so cute. I can just picture these two little ones, cuddling and being so adorable it's a beautiful friendship |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was one hella wild ride and I loved it all the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i much prefer this dumbledore: doing everything he can to help harry, rather than condemning him to die. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp, I read about 20 chapters or so, then started skimming. There were definitely some great parts, and some exciting scenes but overall, I'm rather glad I skipped most of it. The need for Virtue Signaling really detracted from the story. But, then this is fanfic, and part of the fun of that, is people inserting what they like. Thanks for sharing, even if I didn't personally care for much of it, I'm always impressed when people write, and especially, finish a fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Disappointing that you felt you needed to shove hate into Hermiones saintly parents. Good story otherwise . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah so I have finally gotten around to finishing this chapter. Been meaning to tie up this loose end for ages. Wonderful work as always . See you in the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this on July 30, this was trippy to say the least. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait so is hermione's aunt aware of her being a witch? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this jumping back and forth in time to tell the story is so annoying. it makes it harder to keep track of whats actually happening. |
![]() ![]() Love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sirius went to prison in 81, mobile doorstops did not even start becoming available until 85-86, you are way too early in Lupin's statement x |