Reviews for time, and then again
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2018
this is amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
Really great story
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
Beautiful. Perfect.
chai4anne chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
Beautiful. Just beautiful. The whole thing, what Josh is thinking, what Donna's been thinking-but, for me, especially, especially this: "The wind is turning dramatic now, swirling around them in a rush of those orange leaves. Later, Josh thinks he'll close his eyes and remember it like this: Donna's hair whipping across her face, the warm color rising in her cheeks, the uncomplicated way this complicated thing is coursing between them."

Beautiful. Just beautiful!
Arpad Hrunta chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
This is a good scene. I like the symmetry of their eaching thinking (and fearing) they'd never kiss again. I think a scene like this would mitigate some of their Election Day awkwardness, though, and that makes me like it even better.
Bubbly Girl13 chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
Love it! The way you portray Josh and Donna fits so perfectly with how I picture them!
~Bubbly Girl13