Reviews for pluck down the stars from heaven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() and this is how u accidentally start life as a pirate...lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() she's... strangely cute? I mean it's not like she's reincarnated at all, but just a child with different memories. The reasons of her mature act because of her memories, not because she's the person in the memory. That's why she have rather naive thought despite she could hold blood and killing. As a soldier she should have sharp and calculating mind. It's interesting and different, but you still tell nothing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol omg |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I loved it so much omfg |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I loved it so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() omfg lol I love granny |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing. My heart was literally pounding in anticipation when she had the dude at knife point. I really hope u update this one day because this is one of the best one piece fics I've read, especially with a girl mc. There are so many yet little to no difference personality and story wise but this is just gorgeous in the way you write it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really interesting...please continue this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know some people get annoyed when things are left for a long time but you could honestly be posting one-chapter stuff of long stories and I would feel blessed. Clever ideas, clever execution - what more can one ask for? You are absolutely amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your style of writing it just... You're doing your own distinctive style and it just echoes and twists with so much emotions and I absolutely love it. I'm on my phone but I need to hit a computer to even start explaining how absolutely wowed I am reading anything . Loving this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn that's rough. Hopefully she'll still be able to find her brother! I really love this soldier-reborn concept you got going on |
![]() ![]() Keep up the good work and please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the...i dont know why some of the words i write on reviews are always sorry my review probably doesnt make sense with a lot of words lacking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read only 5 chapters but it totally got me hooked up in this story.i hope you update soon.& about ur OC,Seeri i like how you portrayed her as realistic as way you made her not OP is a good despite her having a mind of an adult she stil has a body of a the great DV users in OP like BIG MOM had a hard time controlling their powers when they were only a kid how mich more a regular human girl w/o DV & made us readers look forward to see how Seeri develops from a frail smart girl to a strong woman one 's why i dont like OP OC/reader insert coz there's nothing more to read forward to w/ character development since they were already OP from the the way you made her have her weaknesses like any other human being does is a great the most powerful people always have way write is well thought of .You did great on understanding what readers love to u for this beaitiful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly I will wait forever and ever for this fic to update I'll never stop checkingyou have created cold |