Reviews for Harry Potter breaking free |
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nagiten chapter 8 . 8/17 doesnt he own grimuald so he could just kick everyone out also didn't they need his permission to enter in the first place? |
GenieM chapter 15 . 4/19 I like the story alot! |
Epeefencer chapter 4 . 3/7 Why capitalize the oaths, in doing so you had them shouting the oath. |
Clark959 chapter 15 . 2/24 The story was good but it went very quickly without pause and character development. As the A/N stated, interest in the story was missing so I’m glad it was at least finished instead of abandoned. |
winniesm chapter 8 . 2/24 Why is everyone and their mother shouting all the time? |
Guest chapter 15 . 2/20 Thank you for writing this tale. thank you too for the time and effort you put into this story. The thought, imagination, inspiration, and creativity put into this tale goes to the person who could only make the most if it. Kudo's to you Grey Warden. You've earned it! |
Guest chapter 15 . 1/4 One of the most satisfying fanfic about Harry Potter being a lord. Thank you author for this wonderful read. Best of luck on your next works |
OlympusWitch12 chapter 6 . 3/20/2023 Dude, you have Friday listed twice on the training schedule and the second one contradicts the first one. Either pick one and delete the other or explain why you have two different schedules for Friday training |
Ayakitten83 chapter 15 . 3/14/2023 I loved it anyway. I'm glad you finished and didn't leave it undone. |
Guest chapter 15 . 12/31/2022 Enjoyed it. Thanks. |
Just William chapter 15 . 6/18/2022 A pretty good storyline that would have been much better if (1) there were not so many typo's/wrong words/ errors and (2) if the chapters were fleshed out, giving more context. |
Loresign chapter 15 . 4/19/2022 You may want to consider writing the whole thing out first, then publish it. It will give you time for a beta and correct the mistakes. Mostly this story was very good. |
Loresign chapter 14 . 4/19/2022 In response to the A/N: Yeah, I noticed you were getting rid of the bad guys real fast. The story is very good. You might flesh it out more in the future. It’s just a bit too rushed at this time. |
Tim Randall chapter 15 . 3/25/2022 You are very GOOD writer. I like what you did.! |
waya715 chapter 15 . 3/22/2022 great story! |