Well, things are getting amusing, enter Sun Wukong, Naruto's Pen pal, Naruto's still dense but then again Yang pretty much needs to say to Naruto "Me and u Whiskers are going to start dating " Only then Naruto will realise it, although I doubt that will happen yet.

Well, that was cool team Cardinal got there asses kicked Coco is amusing, wonder who that mystery person is though, could just be Qrow or maybe Jiraya who knows

Well, again that was amusing I wonder what happens next.

Well, damn that was so funny and Sasuke's gonna hate Kurama and Naruto now loved the NaruYang part.

Well, that was rather amusing I can't wait for more and Sasuke's reaction to Haku being a Boy damn it will be a sight to see and read.

I actually forgot about Haku, would have preferred someone else but oh well.

Well, that was a nice start Sasuke and Kurama's here are they in this new world or just a coincidence who knows let the games begin.

okay this story is good! Its funny, humourous and just my type of story i love this please update!

30 freaking meters for the mutant Graboid?! That's like 2x or 3 x the size of even the largest Graboids in the movie series! O.O

You know, a far better name would've been Burnt Gunner. Sounds better and fits a heck of a lot better.

please continue this story

please continue this story. I want to see how this plays out

I think you mixed up amnesty with enmity

Meanwhile, the bowl of ramen making that distance with such pin-point accuracy is surely proof that ramen is the true food of the gods. Guided to Nora's face courtesy of divine intervention.

god. OH MY GOD THIS IS LIT! it's so intense, god bless you Author-san, god bless you

Please don't let this story die.