Reviews for Yuki and Is
delete this account svp chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Nice story so far, but your translation was wrong. It's "wirklich" not "virkelig" even though your attempt at the word amused me greatly
MonsterAndUnicorn chapter 8 . 6/14/2009
*pout* I was almost right whit the language...ooh well..hahahaha...It was a bit funny thinking that it was a mountain landscape since Denmark sorta don't have anything but little dents in the ground xP I'm allowed to bully you...xP just so you know xP...and I loved the story...it was infact better that it was in danish for me atleast..then I don't have to be reminded that I'm norwegian to much xP...oh and if you'd like I can read this over(again) and send you the betaread story...it sounds like you've had an awfull lot of betareaders here but stil there are a lot of mistakes...I'm not saying its a ba...or well..I am saying its a bad thing but I'm not harrasing you about if...just asking xP...now...I dunno how much of this made any sence to you but oh well..Love the story and the plot..the little of it I can see...but not put into words if my life depended on it..btw..LINK TO THE LEMON! or I'll come to denmark and hunt you down! and make you read...LeeGai fluff!...(supposed to be a treath...)
MonsterAndUnicorn chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
...wow was I shocked to see norwegian in here...but it fit that the villans were speaking their own language...but why did you say nej and not nei?...thoug I usualy say nej myself..xP
Kazumi Rokuhai chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Please update? ;_; I'll love you forever...
Kimiko13 chapter 4 . 7/27/2008
1. I ADORE Narusasu. psht, they totally belong together

2. The gore scene was cool...i was slightly confused about what was actually wrong with her...but what i gathered would make a cool horror movie _-

3. Don't write based on the popularity of a ship...if you like what you are writing, keep doing it! Personally, i'll read any in character narusasu.

Kepp up the good work.
Bacontheft chapter 8 . 7/8/2008
aww, poor naruto and sasuke :o
NaruSasuFTW chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
i love it!
Batekatt chapter 3 . 4/21/2008
Ah, so close.. I really thought it was Swedish at first, but got confused as it sounded so Norwegian later on.. *grins* Still, the "hej" tipped me off that it wasn't Norwegian, and Danish really is rather similar when written..

Will be fun to see if you put in any Norse Mythology.. ) Hope you stay true to it if you do though.. )
Batekatt chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
hmm.. Swedish? At least I know it's not Norwegian. )
Sun Knight chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
great story cannot wait to read more soon
AkitaSagaraAlanya chapter 8 . 9/7/2007
It's relly relly good, I'm saving You along whit your stoy to Favorits
Aynessa chapter 8 . 9/6/2007
No~ *sobs* This hasn't been updated in 2 years...but I want more...*cries self to sleep* COME BACK! TT_TT
Twilight Goddess Sage chapter 3 . 5/15/2007
Disreguard my dumb question in the last review...god what was I thinking...

Neat, so you mixed up two languages together eh?

I'm anxious to find out more about these original crystal ball gazing characters of yours...please continue!
Hink chapter 5 . 4/13/2007
hmm...as horrible as it sounds to give up two children, in a state of war when the whole village is at stake, especially as this is a shinobi village, it's kind of a no-brainer. sure there was an option, but is surrender ever an actual option? Konoha would never do it, from what we can see of canon, anyway.
Kinl chapter 4 . 4/13/2007
nope; still totally love naru/sasu, don't think naru/hina matches at all. intriguing story so far, though a little slow with relationship development. and the kids were really disrespectful to kakashi; don't think they would really act that way? or that kakashi would take it? he is their superior after all, as well as their sensei, they have no right to demand answers and ignore an order like that.
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