Reviews for Changing the Future (redone) |
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![]() ![]() His mother or Merry ? A Mother who gave birth to you, or a ship ? Pretty easy choice, don't you think ? |
![]() ![]() Thsi was a really nice story and I like the way it ended. It is so much better than not ever seeing them again. I would like to read about their next meeting very much |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is absolutely excellent! I especially loved imagining the StrawHats wearing what amounts to the Organization XIII uniform. Incredible. |
![]() ![]() These chapters were good for my soul. They were so awesome to read. I especially love the Law and Corazon one. But, like, can we have some bonus chapters where they save Sanji’s mother or Otohime? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, thank you for this, amazing story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm crying... This was beautiful. I wish The Straw Hats would bring everyone, and the I could read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AaAAAH THIS IS SO NICE! I almost cried several times because this was so emotional :'D I loved it. Thank you so much for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YASSSSS! LOVE IT SO MUCH! I love the detail you put into each of the chapters...And the ending was great! Also, I can appreciate the fact that you're a Christian, too, and you don't hide it. :) Great story overall! - Kate |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry but La la la la La la la la Saint Elmo's world |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story awesome read had me with tears at the end. Thank you |
![]() ![]() Chapter 1 is great! The old man’s explanation seems a bit stiff, but it’s not too bad. I’d assume that the Straw Hats saved the guy from something and are getting this. And... does the old man have the ability to watch timelines he’s altered? Does he keep his memory? Also, HELP TRAFALGUY! I love Trafalgar Law! Oh, but Otohime and Shirahoshi... But Corazon! I need the Straw Hats to meet Corazon! I need that so bad! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love is. She is like mom |
![]() ![]() Oh, this was beautiful. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "LOST BROUGHT ME HERE" Interesting concept, I can't wait to see the end result. |