|Reviews for Writings on the Sword|
| Lady Celeblessil chapter 16 . 2/12
Awwwww so glad everything turned up for them in the end... also I'm glad Legolas won that drinking contest... of corse I watched the extended edition... This fan fiction was up to your usual standard and by that I mean so awesomely epic that I'll recommend you to my friends
Lots of love,
Lady Celeblessil of mirkwood forest
| Lady Celeblessil chapter 15 . 2/12
Leggy noooo why why did you take him away from me again
Love your newest fangirl,
Lady Celeblessil of mirkwood forest
| Crescent chapter 12 . 2/12
Wow Thank you soooooòoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for keeping him alive wow also you made me cry again and my parents look at me like I was a lunatic when I ran around the house shouting "he's alive " just thank you
| Crescent chapter 11 . 2/12
Oh wow such feels no I legitimately cried with the thranduil scene you are amazing just just amazing wow now don't you dare make me cry again
| Crescent chapter 9 . 2/12
That moment when you agree with the obviously psychopathic villian about how dumb the hero is... but still an amazing story... come on all your stories are amazing even though some minor facts might be wrong. I really wish I could write like you
| Helena chapter 11 . 1/9/2015
Oh my word, I have never used so many Kleenexes while reading a fanfic as I did when I read the part with Toreingal and Thranduil!
| BookWorm624 chapter 2 . 4/6/2014
Elrond is not a king...he is the Lord of Imladris.
Aragorn is now known as Elessar, not Aragorn. Also, Elrond departed ME about 3 years after the war (I think if my memory serves me well but I could be wrong) and had already parted from Arwen by this time.
Also, I notice that you use names and titles needlessly. Legolas's cousin said "Fear not I have sent word to your father, King THranduil, in Mirkwood" Mirkwood is now Eryn Lasgalen since this is Post ROTK and I am certain Legolas knows who his adar is so there is no need to say father, title and name...it is redundant!
But other than these minor things I am enjoying the story and it is solidly written!
| Starshadow chapter 16 . 4/4/2014
Who won the drinking contest?!
| Starshadow chapter 12 . 4/3/2014
You'll be happy to hear that I was NOT one of those that threw "random things" at you. This chap. was awesome! I had almost thought that you had just really killed Legolas off and left his friends in absolute madness. Good plot, too!
| ShiraChan-Desu chapter 16 . 12/22/2013
-Cries out with joy- That was so beautiful!
| Stormcloudalchemist chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
| Stella Polare chapter 16 . 1/28/2013
OMFG! This is AWESOMAZINGTASTICTABULAR! BEST FANFIC EVER WRITTEN!
| Wood Elf luver chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
*Legolas and I stare at you, utterly shocked. Then, Legolas points at you and whines* She poisoned me! *I laugh* Legolas, everyone does that. It's easy to do to you, because you tend to be stupid. *Legolas looks at me with shock* That's not funny! *I nod* No, but it's true. Now, go away, I have to give a review! *He huffs and walks off, and I look back at you* Alright, sorry about that. He is just...weird. I don't really blame you for poisoning him in this story, because that's what readers love, some good, natural angst. Which means, I love this story! I am only on the first chapter, and I love it! I'm very curious though. Who is the witch in the last part? Did Gimli poison Legolas? I almost guarantee it was the cousin. Never trust your cousins. They are almost as evil as big sisters, only they tend to get their way more often. AND they are very convincing. *You have no idea what I'm talking about, but you let me ramble on anyway, not really taking my advice seriously* Anyway, keep up the good work, and again, I love this story. Let's just say, someone recommended it to me, and I read the first chapter, and I wish I could write freaking chapters this long! I mean, really, I'm a bit jealous of your ability to stay on topic for...however many words are in this chapter. Lol, TTYL! :)
| Always chapter 4 . 9/14/2012
Elrond is a Lord, not a King.
| Sarah Maxime chapter 15 . 9/1/2012
Seriously? You're killing-or "killing"-Legolas -twice- in one story?
Other than that, it's a very good story. You're exceptional at writing the angsty grief parts.