Man this a good story but the grammar is just bad I can’t deal with it anymore

Ace actually gets saved in this. 9/10 times in these fics that start near marineford ace just ends up dying anyways despite a new crew/person/whatever changing things alot

Making him a fish man is certainly something. I figured he'd be a human or likely even a mink, making him a kisame clone is pretty weird but that's unique so I'll see where it goes

Jinbei Best fucking uncle

Fishmen island? then does that mean Shirhoshi for the harem!

yes too nami and if possible robin

Kaido seems the most likely suspect but HOW! with Samehada and extremely strong haki and perhaps a devil fruit along with his fishmen abilities, kisame would be one of roger's rivals at the least as well as being the absolute worst matchup against any devil fruit user.

so how can Kaido if he did kill him even do it or perhaps the one who did it was shanks

Monet x Naruto

I'm sorry I can't read this anymore the grammar is so bad I would say you have to update it soon

Starting to NOT like the plot!
I’m starting to see elements of a crack fic!

RAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! MY BRAIN!

I like the plot, but reading this is a pain!
I’m staying for the plot! Hopefully the writing will improve in later chapters.
Just followed for now.

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!

good chapter, can't wait for naruto escape and show other to not mess with him

Welcome back

It’s 2022 now. When u updating

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