I like it :) Your chapters are long and well written. You take your time to explain things and don't appear to be in a rush, very good!

I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

o.o neato story.. love it please write more

*breathlessly* Wow. That was...amazing.

You've got to keep writing! Please!

The storyline rocks! More chapters!

Ooooh, poor thing, that would have to be scary.

So...what happens next?

Wow! That was good. I really do hope you will keep writing!

omg i realllly like this story i hope that u intend to continue it cuz it is very interesting i like how you made legolas react to her saying that he wasn't real. that made me laugh. im not gonna make any segustions at this point because i don't knoe what you intend to put in this story but i reallly hope you put another chapter up soon.

Hey, this is good! Well written, and with a definite plot. I hope you'll write more - this is really good work, and it would be a shame if you didn't do more. (Now, if only I could take my own advice . . .) I especially like the descriptions of Alyssa's fear, and how Legolas helped her overcome it.

Just please don't let this turn into Mary-Sue! I would be incredibly sad if this turned into one of those notoriously bad stories.

I myself have decided that the elves are ugly half ass losers. Oh, but that's right! They don't exist.

The writing is pretty clear and concise, but the story seems to reek of a Mary Sue. I hope you turn this into something a little more than that.

Keep writing.