Reviews for Rebuilding |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this chapter. I had been wondering what happened to Neville and Hannah. Especially with Hermione, Draco and Neville all working at Hogwarts. Seems a shame that Hermione and Draco would ice him out for what happened with Theo. Especially when they are the only ones from the 8th Years who seem to have lost all connection to the rest of the group. Understandable would be hard to keep up with eight people, though, especially when the original story was supposed to be Hermione and Draco-centric. It just struck me that they never eat with Neville or meet up with him or anything when they’re all at Hogwarts most of the day. I’m looking forward to reading the rest, I see I’m approaching the end, which I’m feeling rather sad about, honestly. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m loving the story so far. And thematically, I appreciate that everyone is pairing up across house lines. However, Ron and Tracey feels a bit heavy-handed. Ron would have had, at the very least, potions, with Tracey, for (4? 5? years. Unclear when you are going to imply she moved to Beauxbatons). That he would not recognize her at any point when they have been dating for some time, I would think she would find insulting. And there is no way I would believe that she didn’t recognize him, or at least know of him. I hope this will be explained in upcoming chapters |
![]() ![]() It would never happened this way... You have to misunderstood the Weasleys to believe in this sshit... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait! Are we sure the curse gone with Voldemort? Quierrel dead, Lockhart vegetable, Lupin resigned, Crouch kissed, Umbitch gangbanged by centaurs, Snape... well, he is actually promoted after 1 year and Carrow prisoned, Weasley Fired (i guess) and Hermione next? I don't think so... |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a story! The textures here were incredible, emotional, and just broken enough to tie it all together wonderfully. I have also dodged far too many responsibilities reading this, and so now I must go and play catch up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since Ginny's male puff belongs to Ginny, we can think of him as a Weasley. Since they are mated with Draco's female puff, she also takes the surname Weasley. One male, one female and 7 children. I guess the Weasleys really are producing more offspring than they can handle. Imagine Draco naming the baby puffs; Charlie, Bill, Percy, Fred, George, Ronald and Ginny. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pansy/Charlie Theodore/Percy And Draco friends with Ginny Who is next? Lucius/Arthur? Molly going to have a stroke :D . . (Ron/His left hand) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everyone said anorexic or pregnant, but I'm thinking of vampirism. She wears baggy clothing to protect herself from the Sun, cannot eat and her skin is pale. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what the f that was too sweetalso what a treat for your Indian readers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() dont know if you read reviews anymore but i must say, you're a terrific writer! i recall reading this YEARS ago, although im so glad i dont remember how this ends. also i might just go through all your stories after this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just picturing Theo's scarf coming out of the he box like one of those clown handkerchief ribbon whatever thingies and it's a really funny image |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gods, I don't even have the words to describe just how much I love this story. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful fic with all of us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write very real arguments to the point that I actually got triggered by a repressed memory of an argument I’d had in the past. Great writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() so much love for this story iv lost count how many times iv revisited it! its a must read |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say thay i love/hate the chapter length. They make the 300 chapters much less intomidating, but its also like popcorn and i cant seem to stop reading even though i need sleep rather desperately. |