I hate fics that bring Dawn into the timeline early.
Dawn was only added to memories. She never existed prior to season 5. It makes no sense.

1) I don’t like the MC passing out powers like candy
2) I don’t like the MC allowing people to morph as his body.
3) Jimmy laughed. "Or-or I could t-touch the cube again an-and start wi-with a n-new base f-form."

Everyone fell silent for a moment.

"Is it really that simple?" Wendy asks.

"Man, that is a huge plot hole," I said while holding out the box to Jimmy.

That’s not how the morphing cube works. Once you become a nothlit (stuck in a morph), you’re stuck permanently. Touching the cube again does not allow you to reacquire morphing ability. Each person can only touch the cube once.

Oh wow he just lost some of his abilities since hes a yssup

Bro sees alien like dog and immediately follows, yet is too paranoid to drink the super potions . Bro is a diffrent kind of weird. lol

God I want to see more of this! I want more of everyone of your stories! Their all so good!

So he knows hes an si and knows of the dangers coming and knows about the powers he has. Yet he doesn’t immediately drink his powers? Lets them roll around his jacket just asking for someone(cough contessa) to steal them or drop out and roll away. This is just borderline negligent in the storyline.

love this story so far keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of this and hopefully more of all your other storys as well please keep up the great work!

I’m embarrassed to admit I only just figured out “Leo” is likely short for Leopard as in butters…

I really should have realized that sooner but I just figured it was a leader during the terminator movies given I never got around to watching those.

I was just re-reading this and realized that if the hell mouth hadn’t been messing with his head he could have practiced density shifting to get in and out of the Summers house. Poor guy needs more practice with his personal skills before facing Levi. Hopefully he makes it to The Potterverse and can practice on some deserving people there.

The word you want is "trough", not "troth". Wildly different meanings!

yeah...no. I feel like this should have just been in the Xovers category only. The only worm part so far is less than a chapter and if someone is looking for a worm fic or the worm part of this fic when it eventually comes,they would either be forced to read like fifty different worlds or not understand anything if they skip to it.

What’s the pattern?

At this point, if he went back to Beta to scout out the local situation and get some info on 'Godzilla', he'd be able to turn any team into an S-class threat in a few days. Then using all the local powers to buff some of his friends who would want to help and just spreading powers around everybody, suddenly Levi is, still gonna tear through everyone. Ok, on second thought, making a stop through Harry Potter and DC or Marvel would be pretty helpful still.

I’ll be honest I held off on reading this story for the longest time.

I had first skimmed through a few chapters when I saw it was a massive x over and just saw way too much random crossovers.

Now I see it’s not that all those universes merged into the worm verse like I had though.

Glad I finally read this one as it was a lot of fun and I look forward to more of it.

Also I love Dawns knee jerk reaction is putting an “all powerful genie” in time out in her personal world the genie created lol.

No such thing as need us as friend more, that's fucking stupid you don't need a specific relationship to support someone. Also willow realizes she made out with a kid right?