Reviews for Victoria
babyvfan chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
This was better than what I expected. It was short but good. I liked it
DylanBlack chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
I wish I could take on another writing project. Well written
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
Not sure how Victoria being a clone of Jean would be female Harry with all of Harry's experiences.
XRaiderV1 chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
interesting premise here on this one. well done.
korrd chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
This is good. I'd like to see another chapter at the very least to see the confrontation between Emma and Jean as well as possibly a third for either a blow up or reconciliation between Jean and Victoria.
geetac chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
I loved reading the story
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
Nice, but a bit too much Jean nd Scott bashing it seems like
Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
Wait... So how can Victoria be Jeans 'clone' and STILL be a Potter and destined savior of the magical world? Jean doesn't have magic or anything else, and just how old was Jean when Victoria was 'born' when she was brought into the magical world to become a Potter and potential savior? *lol*
chaosrin chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
Quite interesting, too bad my writing have grammar problems.
Anyway does it have to be one of the Cuckoos? Always feel they are more mainstream characters.
Vexuq chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
Liked this one-shot. I really enjoy a lot of your fics, especially the femslash ones. I think you're very creative and have ideas that can be expanded greatly.

I truthfully think this one-shot thing is really working for you.

Keep up the good work!

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