Elizabeth needed a reality check and probably still does. At least her brother acted pragmatically. I like this Richard amd hope the last scene is a sigbn that despite their parents' dislike of each other, the two kids will get along. Uodate soon.

So cute. Great start

This story looks like it will be interesting! I hope Bess doesn't fall in love with her uncle though.

Wonder if Henry Tudor will appear. And if Katherine and Anne make a later appearance. This is such interesting premise.

Great chapter.

I thought you loved Edward IV

An interesting beginning for a story.

However, while it is probably true that Richard would not made such a reckless charge in Bosworth if he had a living son and heir, in order to "White rose to bloom again" it was not essential that Richard and Anne Neville had many children, but Richard and Elizabeth Woodiville could work united after Edward IV died.

By taking the crown from his nephew, Edward V, Richard split the supporters of York and that ultimately led to his loss of crown and life.

I keep hoping Richard III won't be evil in this, would be a fun twist