Reviews for Traitor In The Ranks
kawaii.cutie chapter 13 . 7/10/2007
I really like your story. I find it very entertaing. Great job! _
lovely-whisper chapter 13 . 12/5/2005
Please tell me you didn't just kill Samine... Why? Why?

Loved it. SO MUCH! (sorry, didn't mean to yell...)

I'm off to read the fourth part..!
Tajiah chapter 5 . 8/21/2005
Wicked cool sequence!
Tajiah chapter 4 . 8/21/2005
I just finished reading the first two stories in this series, and I am really enjoying this story much more than the others. You have certainly improved your craft through them - looking forward to more!
Lexxiss chapter 13 . 4/15/2003
*mumbles incoherently* She's not dead and you tried to make it seem that way...*points finger at the now not so accused* you just can't kill her off because then you'll have a whole nother story to this 'list' of stories if that's what you'd like to call it, lol! I loved it, and if you don't get the next story up in less than three days not only am I going to plague you with my evil internet magics, but I'm going to hunt Shelly down and take her hostage so you won't have her in your story and then all will be lost! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *choke*

Lexxi
ivorybrowneyes chapter 13 . 4/14/2003
I LOVE IT! hehe. I seriously got a verbal ass-kicking there...I know what's happening..I know what's happening! *dances around happily* that chapter kicked so much ass, despite Xander being an ass to me! So next story please!
Eadha Ohn chapter 13 . 4/14/2003
:: Said nothing but give Spades a dark look that can kill anyone who look at her, but in Eadha's back mind, 'Nobody ever made me feeling like THAT. Nobody...' ::
Dax chapter 12 . 4/14/2003
Hurry up Spades and finish this fic! I'm hoping that you're gonna do another? Or will you start on a new series? Keep up the good work hu!
Lexxiss chapter 12 . 4/13/2003
You killed her off, because you don't want to write another part to this series! *points at the accused* You just couldn't handle the overwhelming demand for your writing, so you killed her off!

Then again she's probably not really dead and they're going to bury her alive...Lol, j/k! Update soon!

Lexxi
Eadha Ohn chapter 12 . 4/10/2003
Wow, now that's angst.

I swear I don't know which to do: to jumping in joy because you updated this story or go strangling you because you did make me to believe that Samine's died for real!

Honey...sweetie...please don't sugarcoating it and just tell us [readers]: is Samine's died for read? FOR REAL?

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...:: screaming bloodly murder :: MURDERER!
ivorybrowneyes chapter 12 . 4/10/2003
Oh my goodness! That was beautiful! *sob* And look, I showed compassion! Well, now that you have finished this one, you can get the next chapter up! And make me a bit more compassionate, because I need a better image :)
Xemindar chapter 11 . 3/23/2003
The story not so bad so far but i highly doubt your goin to kill of your own character. Anyway continue writin, wouldnt mind seeing how this story ends.
Lexxiss chapter 11 . 3/13/2003
How perfect is that! Romeo and Juliet with a bit of a twist; Juliet dies first! Can we say HELL YEAH! I loved it! Let's see the next chapter real soon.

Lexxi
BlueEyedGemini chapter 11 . 3/5/2003
OMFG. *goes back and re reads over and over again* She cant be dead. You have to make her be ok. OMG update soon. I cant believe it. Hurry Hurry .

Cindy
ivorybrowneyes chapter 11 . 3/4/2003
WHAT DID YOU JUST DO? Hehe. Yes, I am going to give you hell for that! lol. But it was well done, so as long as you finish it off well! So tell me what Xander is going to do now!
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