You bastard

Wow
you absolute piece of shit

Really cheering for Katie/Harry/Fleur at this point

I'm really liking this new harry

Okay, its cool that you are determined to give speech a ' instead of a ". Still hate it.

I keep coming back to that final moment and it’s just so perfect. The way harry is still scared of such a statement and fleurs reaction is just so beautiful.

999

Well….

I wish it was happier.

But that’s how it goes.

You’re quite good to have made me so morose…

Good luck out there

- Thorn

PS: Oh, I suppose that’s what cadmean means perhaps…empty, hollow? I just thought of that.

To be honest, that was really very hard to understand…

Awwwww romance and stuff

I suppose I wouldn’t have minded those extra 10 chapters, but that’s because I enjoy fluff as well as the action. Rather helpful I must say. Thorn

Yey it all worked out!

That’s sweetThorn

Okay that went relatively well…

Honestly a H/F pairing is like 70% of why I’m here so I really shouldn’t complain

I guess this portrayal of Fleur just seemed possibly dangerous to me

Let’s see what happens next, I’m excited

- Thorn

Yikes and now Harry is showing Fleur one of his most important secrets and advantages? That just seems like a very bad choice…

I guess this will end up as Harry/Fleur though so hopefully it turns out alright

- Thorn

I mean, yeah I guess he should blame Fleur a bit for what happened with Katie, but more importantly to me is that she basically attacked him with something similar to the imperius curse.

At the world cup, the allure forced men to do things to impress the Veela. I assume that extends to doing whatever they want to impress them or make the Veela like them. So basically she tried to take control of Harry’s mind (on purpose, it wasn’t the passive allure) to make him do what she wanted him to.

In my book that would make her an enemy, or at the very least, someone to be very wary around. If she would control people’s minds, who know what else she might do to get what she wants.