Reviews for A Cadmean Victory
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2021
Okay, its cool that you are determined to give speech a ' instead of a ". Still hate it.
Ralnn chapter 93 . 12/26/2021
I keep coming back to that final moment and it’s just so perfect. The way harry is still scared of such a statement and fleurs reaction is just so beautiful.
percabeth1643 chapter 59 . 12/25/2021
ThorntownPres chapter 103 . 12/9/2021

I wish it was happier.

But that’s how it goes.

You’re quite good to have made me so morose…

Good luck out there

- Thorn

PS: Oh, I suppose that’s what cadmean means perhaps…empty, hollow? I just thought of that.
ThorntownPres chapter 102 . 12/9/2021
To be honest, that was really very hard to understand…
ThorntownPres chapter 49 . 12/8/2021
Awwwww romance and stuff
ThorntownPres chapter 37 . 12/8/2021
I suppose I wouldn’t have minded those extra 10 chapters, but that’s because I enjoy fluff as well as the action. Rather helpful I must say. Thorn
ThorntownPres chapter 36 . 12/8/2021
Yey it all worked out!

That’s sweetThorn
ThorntownPres chapter 24 . 12/8/2021
Okay that went relatively well…

Honestly a H/F pairing is like 70% of why I’m here so I really shouldn’t complain

I guess this portrayal of Fleur just seemed possibly dangerous to me

Let’s see what happens next, I’m excited

- Thorn
ThorntownPres chapter 23 . 12/8/2021
Yikes and now Harry is showing Fleur one of his most important secrets and advantages? That just seems like a very bad choice…

I guess this will end up as Harry/Fleur though so hopefully it turns out alright

- Thorn
ThorntownPres chapter 23 . 12/8/2021
I mean, yeah I guess he should blame Fleur a bit for what happened with Katie, but more importantly to me is that she basically attacked him with something similar to the imperius curse.

At the world cup, the allure forced men to do things to impress the Veela. I assume that extends to doing whatever they want to impress them or make the Veela like them. So basically she tried to take control of Harry’s mind (on purpose, it wasn’t the passive allure) to make him do what she wanted him to.

In my book that would make her an enemy, or at the very least, someone to be very wary around. If she would control people’s minds, who know what else she might do to get what she wants.
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 98 . 12/7/2021
Fuck I actually cried at the Katie scene…. that’s never happened before. People have got close but fuck I’ve never cried before! Ohhhhh the feels are real. This is a masterpiece of work.
ThyKinGrid chapter 103 . 11/28/2021
shit ending
Guest chapter 104 . 11/23/2021
I rarely review stories but I had to after reading all of this. This was an incredible story. Heart strings were pulled throughout. Despite being very different from the rest of the story, I thought the ending was very engaging and liked how you did something unlike most other fics that I’ve read. Thank you for the all time you have put into this, you have created something wonderful.
HelpmeHermione chapter 28 . 11/19/2021
So I'm guessing Neville will be the underwater victim. It very well couldn't be Sirius or a portrait. Glad to see the soul fragment gone. Not into Harry using Tom's smile. It's disturbing and I don't want to dislike Harry.
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