|Reviews for Birth|
| Justine chapter 16 . 10/3/2018
when is the rest coming
| Toxicological chapter 16 . 3/25/2016
Yayyyy, introductions *0*
Deh teacher is uptight and creepeh D:
Pshhh, wanna' get out of that green quickly; blue all the way! X3 xD
Nice chappie, Darky. :3
| New Era of G chapter 16 . 3/24/2016
You just summarized everything again... Chapters aren't meant to be summaries, they're meant to be descriptive.
| 404errorinyourways chapter 15 . 3/9/2016
That was really good. I hope you update soon!
| New Era of G chapter 13 . 1/28/2016
I still feel like I don't know what's going on sometimes, but it might be bad memory.
| New Era of G chapter 12 . 1/28/2016
It's time to rekill some dead peeps...
| New Era of G chapter 11 . 1/21/2016
All the summarizing makes it hard for me to understand what's going on. Actually be descriptive, don't just summarize the plot of the chapter.
| New Era of G chapter 9 . 8/23/2015
All these bad choices XD
| New Era of G chapter 8 . 8/22/2015
Scar's so chill, I like her XD
| New Era of G chapter 7 . 8/17/2015
You better not be pretending to remember again... "D
| New Era of G chapter 6 . 8/17/2015
Darkeh, this chapter is REALLY unclear :P you shouldn't rush through your writing. I had pretty much no clue what was happening a lot...
Include who's talking. I didn't understand why Hampnie suddenly showed up until I read over the start a LOT.
Include more of a description than 'Yandere Fanboy'... I don't know who that is.
Over all, don't rush. You're a good writer, your impatience is all that holds you back.
I don't need no last name! Nya!
| New Era of G chapter 3 . 8/16/2015
I don't like Hampnie D: ignoring me...
| New Era of G chapter 2 . 8/15/2015
Lel, Imma kill him for that fake FT name thing...
It's too bad I quit on you :D constant amnesiac...
| New Era of G chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
Good writing, Nya