Reviews for If these wings could fly
Princess of The Volturi chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
I love you haha your the best author ;)
Virtual Person chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
Yes, you're right. Jacob is the best virtual character ever but Bella didn't deserve him. I am so glad you didn't cut his hair.
This story is very well written, thank you!
April-Showers82 chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
You really were spot on with how Jacob and Bella were prephase. Bella never was able to just love Jacob and be happy, but I like how you made her have enough courage to finally show him how she felt. Now, I feel that they can last through everything. Kudos!
megan39 chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
Ummm, I think I'll review,lol. This was fun to read; I liked how you included several of her high school friends within the story. Glad she finally took the initiative at the end and kissed him!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
loved it :)
KSave chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
I liked this. It was sweet and fun, I agree with you that I think it would've been more interesting if she had chosen Jake.
FangsandDaggers chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
Ok, so i got pressured into reviewing this ;-D
What i liked - erm, so the arguments between bella and Jacob were cool, believable which is something rare. And i like the detail in building up the background and explaining whetevand what was happening - it was enpigh to actually visualise in my mind as i read, which is cool too. Oh and i liked how sometimes there were poeces of the original words by SMayer worked in, made it something kore solid or realistic, for me anyway. And i liked Jacobs description of the charm bracelet, particularly the wolf and the sun and moon. All in all a thoroughly good read, i trust you plan on continuing/expanding it. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Loved the silly randomness at the end too, cheeky, like seeing the outtakes at the end of a movie ;-)