Thank you, for bringing to life these characters, your stories are well written, please continue.

Can I speak honestly?
Cuz' Jack saying "it went too far" is kind of about his own reaction to the situation too. An I know both Elsa and Anna have trauma but so does Jack and this seems like the stuff of new nightmares for both him and Elsa... Like why did Elsa think so badly of him despite the no. of times he proved himself? Ad he's also made a lot of mistakes (not arguing that) but this situation must have messed him and Elsa up on a subconscious level

Maybe add Hiccup and Astrid into the story. Maybe also add the return of Pitch Black Jack frosts archenemy and Elsa’s imaginary childhood friend

Nearly there. They're nearly there.

I've been reading and following this Fic since late 2015 (if someone had told me back then that I'd still be reading this fic at age 24 i would laughed at them) I've even got it saved on my browser so I can check for updates every now and then. it was actually one of the first pieces of fanfiction I ever read, not to mention that at the time I hadn't even seen Frozen or ROTG (i still haven't actually watched Frozen 2). Suffice to say, I can't look at either of those two franchises without thinking of Jelsa and of this fic.

I've read quite a bit of fanfiction since then (I suppose I have you to thank for that, at least partially), and yet I still find myself coming back to this piece since (A) your style of writing is quite descriptive and pleasant to read (I swear I can picture Elsa's bedroom in my head) and (B) your apparent willingness to stick by it to the end. I can't tell you how many promising, engaging pieces of fanfiction I've gotten engrossed in, only to see them cut short, left unfinished and unresolved - a casual victim of the realities of online amateur literature. I'm so very, very glad this fic wasn't one of them.

I know that as long as you're willing to write this fic to it's conclusion, I'm more than willing to read and enjoy it.

- A Loyal Reader

P.S: Please don't leave my boy Frederik hanging in the wind. If his fascination and belief in flight and "winged creatures" alongside the Orphanage bit means what I think it does, then I have quite literally been waiting YEARS to see those two characters meet.

Yay finally a new chapter! I’ve been waiting forever for this. In the midst of dreadful deadlines, finals, chaos, and exhausion, taking a break to read your brilliant piece of writing is an absolute enjoyment.

Love the adorable interaction between Bruni and Jack! And I absolutely love how you introduced Honeymaren and Rider. Their characters have so much potential, yet not fully developed in Frozen 2. I really hope to see more interaction between them and the others in the future chapters (and possibly, in Frozen 3)

Speaking of Frozen 3, we’re all looking forward to it, don’t we? I’m sure every Frozen fans out there have been thinking about it since its announcement. Hopefully this time everyone will stay in character (like they do in this fanfic), and have a development after their next adventure. So dear author, what’s your take in Frozen 3? How do you think will it turn out to be? What do you wish to see / not see? I’d really like to know your thought on this :))

I just want to hug and strangle almost every character in this story for putting me through emotional angsty hell.

Looking forward to the next chapter, and hoping the universe(author) actually takes pity on our main characters and gives them a much deserved emotional break… like that's ever going to happen :)

Plus the whole nightmare conspiracy with Pitch "supposedly" being back, we're probably in for a bumpy ride.

Let's see how everything that could go wrong would hopelessly go wrong

I'm reeeeeaally hating Anna after this chapter. I don't understand justifying a that Jack went through as one big shit test and expect him to just "get over it".

Still love the story though

HOLY FUCK, THIS WAS TENSE! (Forgive me for my language)

Freakin' hell, Eugene cracks me up! XD

Ok, I think I've past the point where I initially stopped (Chapter 55? I don't remember.) And I have to say:

THIS IS INFINITELY DIFFERENT FROM WHERE I STOPPED! AND IT'S SO CUTE AND SWEET THAT I'M PUKING ALL KINDS OF SUGAR!

I stopped reading this in 2017 when you were doing major revisions in the story, and by then, I lost interest in Jelsa (The betrayal, I know) and I only got back because of Sarcastic Chorus' video. And this was so much better than what I read back then. I can't wait to finish this story up to the current chapter!

What do you know. The cute lizard is coming in

I am highly and I mean highly DISAPPOINTED with this whole frozen 3 thing️ if a movie is too long it becomes a terrible ideal and as a book writer trust me it's true. Frozen 3 is a bad ideal ️️ capital latter BAD. I love this movie and I don't mean love it but I mean I LOVE THIS MOVIE Frozen 1, Frozen 2, Frozen olaf adventure, Frozen fever, staying home with Olaf, and Now frozen three! If there is no jack frost then I am not in support

Oooh! love it love it love it. elsa is so adorable and innocent and the way jack broke down was just so realistic. fundamentally he is a good guy. honestly if frozen 3 doesn't fit with the story I'm think just stick to frozen 2 canon compliant, this story is masterpiece enough without having to adjust for frozen 3 details.

Hey, hi, yeah...I have been reading this story it seems like forever, and I just wanted to let you know how much I truly enjoyed your writing. I check my email weekly, which is very often for me, hoping to see an update notice and seeing one makes my day. So, yeah... thanks for sharing this with us...

Hi great chapter again, I read At my Center and I still think your work is better your writing is so funny and in character. Your writing is so unique, I can only think of one other fanfic that matchs your writing style and I have read alot of fanfics (and not just Jelsa ones) and yours is still number 1 for me. I think second place goes to Child of the Winter Solstice another Jelsa fanfiction but it never was finished, still really good must read for what's there. Anyway love your work as always God bless and have a great day!