Reviews for Big Money Mob Boss
llazo4108824 chapter 4 . 1/25
This is some fanfic you made and could you make more chapters soon please I like to see what happens next to them.
Lovely chapter 4 . 8/26/2016
Wow, I am taken and in absolute awe of your writing! Diamond is absolute perfection as well as Usagi/Serena. I am begging you to continue, and Oh god's do I pray she ends with the White Prince for once! Ill await happily! Although it has been a year since an update. So much Darien/ Mamoru. I am pleading for more Diamond! 3 -Sincerely and hopeful, Lovely.
Twiggirl006 chapter 4 . 6/7/2016
Great story! I'll be following for sure.

Thanks!
b u n n y chapter 4 . 4/10/2016
please update! this story is intriguing and very amazing so far! i wonder what is going to happen next! please, please million times please update!
phillynz chapter 4 . 3/20/2016
i really like this story hope you update serena
Jenniiibear chapter 4 . 12/10/2015
I am really enjoying the premise of this story. I hope you continue with it because you left us on a big cliffhanger. I saw that some chapters mentioned they were revised but I still saw a number of small minor errors. If you are looking for a beta reader let me know as I would be more than happy to help out :) Looking forward to your next instalment!
The Quill of Fate chapter 4 . 11/27/2015
Very good. Eager to see more very soon.
Veraozao chapter 4 . 10/26/2015
love it, kiss
Solaria Sunstone chapter 4 . 9/26/2015
Aw this was such a good chapter, can't wait for the next update.

Solaria Sunstone xxx
Solaria Sunstone chapter 2 . 9/25/2015
This is so food, very interesting, there's very few sailor moon story's that go along a mafia plot line. And the ones that do are either uncompleted, not very good or boring. Just from two chapters I can tell this is different from other story's like this. I'll probably check If you have other stories too. I'll get onto reading the other chapters in afl few hours.

Solaria Sunstone xxzxcx
00Ambrosie00 chapter 4 . 9/24/2015
Nest chapter so far! I am completely addicted to this story!
dori-tori chapter 4 . 9/21/2015
This is a seriously awesome story and the way you've written it so far is actually to perfection!

Can't wait for more updates! I'll be following! This is only the beginning!

Please update ASAP!

Xx dori-tori
NikkiBC chapter 4 . 9/19/2015
How exciting!
SaphireShimmer chapter 4 . 9/18/2015
Ok, how is it possible that you made me love Darien even more? Other than being a mob boss, you have captured his personality perfectly I think. The way he has such self control and is caring, sweet, loving and concerned for Serena... *sigh*

A few helpful notes:
Her name keeps changing (Serena, Serenity, Selene)
Seized should be ceased

Keep it up, loving the plot and overall details. Great length, nice speed to the story. It's hard to find that balance between detailed, slow and rushing through scenes but I feel you have found it. Looking forward to the next installment.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/18/2015
Love love love this story. More soon please!
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