Reviews for Turnabout Delivery
Skillet Lord chapter 18 . 10/25/2015
Great conclusion. Can't wait for the next story.
JordanPhoenix chapter 17 . 10/25/2015
hee! poor Gummy had to clean up that confetti! loves it! and yay! Daddy Gummy and Maggey!
Loved the JusticeCykes ending and the bit with Simon! How wonderfully done and canon-like!
Also...Nick and Maya. Enough said. Squee! Kudos my friend, for writing a wonderfully witty and romantic story about pizza...and then ending it in a way that wasn't TOO cheesy! XD

Thumbs up, can't wait for the next install!
Skillet Lord chapter 17 . 10/25/2015
Awesome ending. So what was Broski's sentence?
Multifangirl6 chapter 17 . 10/25/2015
I love it! It was such a good ending I laughed and cried (last chapter of the case). The breakdown was awesome Bro! And Maggey and Dick are having a baby and Apollo got all his memeroy back and... Everything was awesome and perfect and I loved it!
Can't wait for any other stories you write!
Skillet Lord chapter 16 . 10/24/2015
I'm guessing we'll learn the motive next chapter?
Anikasnow6 chapter 16 . 10/24/2015
Damn. This is good. :D
I feel kinda bad for Broski, in spite of my hate for him. Although, he should know better than to lie in a court of law, obviously XD
Too many bro puns...ahhh -v-'
I'm sad to hear this story's ending soon, but...there's an epilogue to look forward to, and another story focusing on Maya, so I can't wait! 0
Multifangirl6 chapter 16 . 10/24/2015
Oooooh. The suspense is killing me. It's so great the plot, the waybits written. Can't wait for an update.
Anikasnow6 chapter 15 . 10/20/2015
Ahh I probably should have left a review earlier but I was incredibly busy yesterday TT_TT I wasn't expecting the really quick update XD
The Justicykes in this is way too cute OAO And I love how everyone's supporting Phoenix, he can do it! (9OnO)9
Edgey is so supportive of Gumshoe. Gumshoe is the Scruffy Detective, but he's so loyal to everyone around him and I love it. Speaking of which, it was a pretty cool idea to use Black Psyche Locks for Maggey.
And of course I'm glad Apollo got his memories back-it's about time _' It was kind of interesting how Apollo found the idea of complete trust and belief hard to grasp at first, but it made sense... Come to think of it, the only person who hasn't really hurt him in any way is Trucy. Well, you could say otherwise, but wow. A lot of people have hurt or betrayed him. It's a little sad that he didn't remember Clay, but he didn't really remember anything anyway XD
One thing though-towards the middle of the story, slightly towards the end, there's a part that reads, "Athena couldn't help but feel sadness. _Athena must have been really happy with me._" I'm not sure, but I think it should be, "Apollo couldn't help but feel sadness"...? Not sure though
I'm glad that the story is continuing!
Sorry for the super long review, this chapter gave me a lot of feels
Skillet Lord chapter 15 . 10/19/2015
So why exactly did Broski kill her? Maybe he's really …

Matt Engarde's brother!
JordanPhoenix chapter 14 . 10/18/2015
Dang Dawg, apologies I didn't realize the stupid system had cut off my last review attempt!

ch 13: Broski (BTW on team loathe him but love this story) best freak-out ever! Can't wait to see Nick CUT HIM TO PIECES!

ch 14: Maya: if you start talking like him, I'm leaving you! This made me crack up...along with the Manfred style headbanging! hilarious stuff! Can't wait for next chapter and see what Dick whips out! (oh crap, PHRASING! oops!)
Multifangirl6 chapter 14 . 10/18/2015
Let it Bro from Bisneys Brozen
That was great and I honestly laughed out loud.
Love it.
DiamondTrust2 chapter 14 . 10/17/2015
Y know, not to be nitpicky, this takes place in 2028, not 2014 or 2015, so it might be an old movie.. Just saying..
Anikasnow6 chapter 14 . 10/17/2015
Everyone misunderstands Nick, poor guy XD But at least Gumshoe helped them pull through...for now. Broski is going to regret giving the defense a second chance, tsk tsk
I love your writing, it seems so...Ace Attorney OAO And the characters are so dynamic and interesting. I can't believe the story's almost over, but at least it'll be an even 15 chapters... :U
JordanPhoenix chapter 13 . 10/16/2015
Broski (BTW on team loathe him but love this story) best.
Child of Ragnarok chapter 13 . 10/12/2015
Oh, the punniness!
(Brohemoth, maybe? Or maybe Slowbro? Brokémon?)
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