This kind of sounds like a Magical Girl Spec-ops Asuka crossover

this is pretty decent while the conversations might get slightly detached at times i think you did a good enough job and you deserve some credit for coming up with a pretty unique idea it was something i haven't seem before and you did a good enough job putting it together were im not feeling like it butchers everything that has to do with the show

Holy cow, that was really good.

A very different story and one that passes the scratch and sniff test for quality and presentation. A different twist on the usual Ranma magic girl story.

Very funny story of nabs as a magical girl. Not many of them out there it seems. Thanks for sharing.

Good story. I enjoyed it and if you decided to continue it further I wouldn't mind seeing where it goes. Only problems I saw were minor editorial issues which were easily read through.

Sure, Nabiki is evil, but yours is a story that peels away the layers of her character WELL and gives a good REASON for her to be the way she is. You don't just ignore the canon totally in pursuit of a Nabiki that exists only in your mind. You actually make me believe it.

The storyline itself reminded me of Sailor Nothing. A magical girl who got involved in the battle too young and too alone. And of all the Nerimas, Ranma is probably the only one who could deal with demons, with or without powers. I would actually like to see Akane and Kasumi come out of the effects of the demon attack, and I like how you lampshaded Ranma's out of character moments. :D Maybe the influence of Fuwa-chan? I can see the responsibility of accepting The Call making him more serious and prone to think before he acts.

I'd totally read a story where Retired Magical Girl Nabiki recovers from her PTSD. Maybe with the backdrop of a new invasion starting up, one that Ranma handles, what with Fuwa saying Ranma's got what it takes and his own canon talent for training. That could be fun.

I mean it's probably not happening since this is tagged as complete, and it doesn't need to happen as the story is fine as is, but I'd read it if you were to post it. You know, just putting it out there. :P

going against cannon is what fan fiction is all about this story is a good example that is what makes it so good, Abraham Lincoln vampire hunter, pride and prejudice and zombies, are other examples. the human imagination has no limits and it shouldn't be limited to something like "cannon" infinite dimensions in infinite combinations.