Reviews for Tomboy in a dress HIATUS
Everclear70 chapter 2 . 8/28/2015
I didn't even know what to say in the first chapter, but here I am on the second chapter just hypnotized reading every word you written down. It gives me a reason to always keep reading because I'm not so often glued to things.
Destiny chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
I loved it so far! :)
I definitely want to continue reading!
oh! Also you did leave some words out, I don't remember all of them but I remember one was when the guys were plotting to break Helga out, right before they noticed she was there. In the quotes they were talking about her but you didn't use 'her' or 'she' Atkins define it. But it was obvious enough to understand what was going on, so it didn't even disrupt the story.
Awesome job! Can't wait for more!
LeDawn chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
I thought that Arnold and Helga would be closer in age you know like Helga out of school
thestrangeolive chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
Oh wow i really can't wait to see where this it going! I love the idea of Arnold being a teacher and Helga being a bratty student but you already knew that haha xD Like always, you have my full interest so i'm very excited to read more :3 Oh and yaaay a new story! That means new adventure! xD
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