Reviews for Unfinished Business
MaliaSlytherClaw chapter 4 . 6/19
Loved it
Bookwormkat1 chapter 1 . 1/17
"alarmingly proficient with pointy objects"

I choked
scarletvixenwthorns chapter 4 . 11/13/2018
Absolutely lovve
Mdawg1425 chapter 1 . 11/13/2017
What beautiful tension! Loved this so so much.
Nancepance chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Oh no, not the hymen thing haha. You do know that it doesn't actually work that way don't ya? Somehow this always has my hackles rising.
Otherwise great story!
Elzie chapter 4 . 5/18/2017
I loved it!
Wahboop chapter 4 . 10/23/2016
That was quiet and beautiful yet so passionate and playful and piratey and *gasp* THEM.
Smile Back chapter 4 . 9/5/2016
poor will... but he really needs to open his eyes .
SirenLuna chapter 4 . 7/30/2016
I've gotten to read a few of your stories today and they are all amazing! This one is my fave so far. Ever thought of doing a sequel towhees Jack and Lizzie do have a baby?
OrionRedStar chapter 4 . 6/14/2016
"Ill never betray you again, my heart couldnt take it."


Love this fic, and do not hate me for saying sweet again but that is such a compliment. I love how they manage to get past the hurts they have doled out to each other and can still love so intensely.

Absolutely adorable...BRAVO!

Putting this into my community if it is not already there!
OrionRedStar chapter 3 . 6/14/2016
Aww, I cannot help it, I am a sucker for a 'sweet' Jack when he makes love to Lizzie...I love how caring he is, even when he can justify being cruel .

And she is just too much...pressing him still with the teasing ...but we like out Lizzie saucy! :)

And jack Admitting it "I came back for you" Awwwwww sugar sugar, love it...

Loving this fic!
OrionRedStar chapter 2 . 6/14/2016
Alright...gimme Jack's phone number...I wanna make a a date with him. LOL

I love the way Eliz brazenly calls him out here, and the finally gets past his own feelings of being intimidated by her...knew he would. :)

Love the sexy passages, good work constructing them juuuuusssstttt so.

OrionRedStar chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
Ooooh la sexy...and he is so cagey. I can see him being like that too at this time frame, just after the Locker.

I love the interplay between them, how Jack loves to get the upper hand 'so to speak'


Good chapter! Onward I Press!
The-Pirate-Lass chapter 2 . 3/5/2016
"well thank fuck for that" Haha. I laughed aloud. Wasn't expecting that one. :D
"Say it again." Love it. I've always wondered how he would react to Elizabeth being sweet to him. I think you did well!
Goshhhgabby chapter 4 . 1/21/2016
I had a POTC movie marathon night and I've been obsessed with an Elizabeth and Jack pairing and you made my fantasy between them come true! I loved this story. I love how you stayed in character and how it took place in the storyline and you focused on the romance between them. Absolutely adored this story great job! I felt like this should've taken place in the movie lol. Once again I loved it Thankyou for this story!
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