|Reviews for A wand, sword and a gem|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
What the fuck is this!?
| Chagrined chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
Just some advice for ya,
You need to separate dialog from the actual story :0 when someone is speaking it should look a little like this:
"Hello, this is dialog!"
Otherwise it's pretty hard to tell what's going on :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
Dude if your not younger than 8 you should be embarrassed my little one could do better and 7
| Lookaal chapter 1 . 9/5/2015
Plz continue i real want to read the rest of the stor!13 3
| WisteriaKitsune chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
Could you please PLEASE edit this its some of the worst spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes I've seen in fanfiction