Reviews for Magicstar's story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS SO GOOD EVERYONE I KNOW IS [[Dead]]! |
![]() ![]() A kit will apper with the power of all and will save thunder, shadow, river, and wind Jayfether the medicine cat of i think it was thunderclan or skyclan im not sure so the real propasy of magicstar is... MAGIC STAR IS MY PETTTTTTTTt |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm. Not a bad way to start it. But maybe give a little more details to this? Make the chapter longer? And, um, not trying to be rude or anything, but I don't believe cats can yodel. Though it was a little amusing. Also, maybe check over your story a few times? People will totally flame this due to spelling mistakes. They may not be able to read this. Good luck though! - Flameheart |