Reviews for Do Me A Wrong |
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Damaio The End chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 Really great introduction chapter i like the unique angle you have taken on this crossover |
BornSinner01 chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 I really like this first chapter. The plot is believable, your grammar is great, dialogue is well written. I think this can end up being my favorite story on this site. I think this is the first story I've read by you and just with the way you've written this one makes me want to read all of your other stories. As for pairings maybe Rias since she will most likely play some kind of part in this story, or Sona since I feel she's underused and she can be a cool character. Whomever you choose I just want her to be a strong willed woman simply because women seem a lot more tentative and submissive in stories when around the person they have affection for regardless of how powerful they(the woman) may be. Women like Grayfia or a lot more interesting and attractive then women like Hinata or Orihime (in my opinion of course). Regardless I love the story so far. Hope you update soon. And be well. Peace Bro. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 Really promising start. Though I like to think I appreciate all genres of music equally I dabble a lot in metal myself too |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 not bad will there be regular updates or just random? |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 Wonderful idea! I would really like to read a scene where Ichigo tells one of his old friends/allies that he has a new job. He says that his boss is an idiot but he's still a nice guy. When Ichigo is asked who his boss is he nonchalantly replies "Satan." |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 One chapter in and im already in love with story and wanting more |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 A lot of potential as for pairings NO ICHIGO/RIAS. No problem with it but its unoriginal. Other than that good start |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 Looks like you have not read bleach manga for last five years . That's why you have so misconceptions of power levels. |
Mahesvara chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 Great start of a, hopefully, even better story! As for pairings: Kuroka, Serafall, Rossweisse and Yasaka with Ichigo? |
awwsomegirl28 chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 This is SOOOOOO great! I cannot wait for the next chapter.! |
Sceonn chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 He jumps into the devil bandwagon without even consulting Kisuke first? After his adamant refusal to lose his humanity. |
risca78 chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 new spin on this crossover, looking forward to the next chapter |
Xearthes chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 Moar. Now. |
Hakkyou no Yami chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 well, I'd suggest giving Ichigo Rias since without doubt with Sirzechs being the overprotective big brother he is, he would trust no one with his sister so easily. but with Ichigo I think he can trust her enough with him, he knows he would protect her and would be suitable for her. plus he maybe able to free her from Riser engagement if Ichigo achieve one of the higher class devil titles. |
bleach2121XX chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 This story reminds me of wanderlust, which is one of my favorite bleach fics. Its also a high school dxd crossover that's different from all the other ones I can recall. Well done |