Reviews for Why?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
*sniffle* That was beautiful...Please write something with Raditz and Goten please!
Kakurosu chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Diosa de la muerte chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
I wonder who the enemy who made the strange wish, obviously he not was benefited. But Goku, Vegeta, Raditz and Nappa. After all, they all had business that fix. Good story, straight to favorites.
VxB chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Okay, just a little bit of advice here so please do not mistake this for a 'flame'.
You might want to consider a beta. At times, it was kind of hard to follow.
Also, it makes no sense how you used some of the Japanese dub names and then some of the English dub names. Personally, if I said that the story was in English, I wouldn't start putting random Japanese words in it.
Apart from that, it's a really good fic!
Cryptic Saiyan chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
i can't believe this! I finally found it! This was the first fanfiction i had ever read, like maybe eight years ago. to this day i still remember it. it will always hold a special place in my heart
Zan67 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Very nicely written. I like how Raditz and Goku reconnected at the end. I kind of wish Toriyama had done something like this with Radtiz in DBZ.
Earthdude chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Very good!
One percent chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
that was so nice! and so well thought! and so unexpected! and Zarbon is still alive and he killed Dodoria? yeah, that was definitely great!

good to see that Goku finaly accpeted his big brother. It feels so intimate to say it somehow because I have a hard time imagining a brotherly relation between the two XD

awesome explanations and plot too!

but are they really going to go back to hell so soon?
dirtyShoes chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
yet again, good stuff.
Kakarata chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Just curious: why choose such weak villains? Just curious.
Lone Warrior2 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
Aw... that was cute! Goku forgave Raditz... I see now why the story is called "Why?". Very good. I have to admit the beginning and the fight was kind of choppy but it seems you just wanted that as a reason to bring Nappa and Raditz back. Therefore the beginning served its purpose. That is the last story that i've read out of order and i shall continue the stories in the proper order this time. I will also earn my right to read it and review more often this time too.

I hope you continue to write really great stories like this,

Lone Warrior2
Warrior from beyond chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
AW! That si so cool!
Curvuto chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
that was really good! one shots are kinda disappointing because some ppl dont end them right but you did a very good job. i dont remember any swearing either
UnromanticPoetess chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Ah. Truly inspirational to see how various characters had changed… and certain characters could explain things done in life. Sort of a vindication for both Vegeta and Raditz. And Zarbon… I never truly believed he was purely evil. Or stupid, for that matter. I AM a bit confused on the timeline. When was this supposed to be taking place? It didn’t feel post-Buu, but that’s when I truly believed that Goku and Vegeta could work together… or even stand the sight of each other. Oh, well.

Until next time.
Thanatos Nemesis chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
I loved it! Goku and Raditz got the chance to work things out!
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