Reviews for Story of the Cero Espada
biob1 chapter 2 . 12/31/2021
Good work
biob1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2021
Pretty ok but why would he sleep on the couch if they have multiple bedrooms
Efthee chapter 3 . 9/2/2021
Hmm the idea and plot is very interesting but the dialogues are very bad and i guess the sentence structure or like the flow from one conversation to another feels awkward.
Nathair1 chapter 13 . 7/8/2021
I'm with kisuke, I'd be laughing like a lunatic as well
BearGlitch chapter 1 . 3/26/2021
"I can read and write" The sand?
BearGlitch chapter 1 . 3/26/2021
Please spell check
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 1 . 3/1/2021
I could never ask for a better reason to not include Yammy.
XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 1/14/2021
Oh God, it's so cringe. Every character speaks like a 13 year old.
Pinkypi chapter 2 . 10/24/2020
Your power levels for them were pretty spot on. Since the 9th espada died to a shikai, the 8th to a Quincy without access to the more powerful Quincy tools, the 7th was a gimmick fight. Grimmjaw was significantly stronger than the 7th. With Notre being in the same ballpark but having tougher defences in exchange for grimmjaws speed. Ulqiorra was the 4th because he hid a lot of power so even though first release was stronger than 5th and 6ths release and his 2nd release would've made him the Cero espada. So I'm surprised he ra is that higher. Harribel was strong Barragons aspect made him hard to fight despite probably being around 5th or 6tg in actual combat power
Pinkypi chapter 1 . 10/24/2020
It's written really well though the dance scenes feel a bit awkward but that's probably because as newly made arrancar my brains telling me they haven't had enough time to developed those trains of thoughts and maybe it's a bit early for the talks but instinct would want them to stick together
Fanficlover909925 chapter 2 . 6/29/2020
I'm currently on the 2nd chapter, I really wish that I could never reach the end of the story
Loyal Kriegsmen chapter 22 . 2/4/2020
I loved this story, and your writing. I have a request, and would be extremely happy if you can write it. Can you do a Bleach/DxD where Ichigo has a harem, or just Rias, or Koneko
Guest chapter 7 . 10/16/2019
Wtf, why is the number 5 espada so weak to just be kidnapped not by other espada but weaker arrancers? Nel should have been able to kill all of them with out a thought instead you turned her into a complete weakling. Pathetic
Tilty.bbb chapter 22 . 6/12/2019
This was a fantastic read well done
aaaah chapter 4 . 5/5/2019
This would be nice if your dialoge made any sense at all. Your dialogue is rambling. It's just opainful to read. People don't talk like this. People don't tell each other things like this. People don't reveal things unless they have a reason to. Your writing fails in all of the above.
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